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课件网) 审 审题 圈划关键词 确定人称时态 确定写作对象和内容 列 列出不同的句式 列出文章结构 恰当使用连接词 改 检查语法、拼写等错误并改正 01 02 04 03 05 06 定 连 抄 字丑多扣分 认真抄正 如何写好一篇好作文 话题：假期生活 暑假即将到来，作为即将踏入毕业班的你打算如何度过一个有意义的暑假呢？请你根据一下图标内容，以“A Meaningful Summer Holiday”为题，写一篇英语短文，词数80左右。 审 认真读题，圈划出关键信息。 定 文体 时态 人称 说明文 一般将来时 I 写作对象： 写作目的： 写作要点： 读者 介绍自己的暑期安排 3+1自拟 列:逻辑顺序词+句式 To start with, Next, What's more, Last, 开头：As we know,...... 结尾：In a word,.... plan to/want to/would like to be going to do it's a ..idea to do sth. it's+meaningful for me to do sth. 列:逻辑顺序词+句式 范文：基础款 The summer holiday is coming soon. How can we make it meaningful Here are my plans. Fisrtly, I plan to do some reading after I finish my homework. Secondly, I’m going to do more exercise to keep healthy. What’s more, I will develop healthy eating habits. Thirdly, I will help my mother with some housework, such as cooking and doing some cleaning. Last, it’s a good idea for me to learn to play the guitar. In a word, I will make full use of time to spend a meaningful holiday. 范文：升级版 As we know, spending a meaningful summer holiday matters a lot. Here are my plans. As the saying goes, “Reading makes a full man." So to start with, I plan to do some reading after I finish my homework. Next, it’s a good idea to develop healthy eating habits as well as doing more exercise to keep healthy . What’s more, I am willing to help my mother with some housework, such as cooking and doing some cleaning. Last but not least, trying to help others in need is meaningful for me. In a word, as long as I keep the plans in mind and put into practice, I truly believe that I will have a meaningful holiday. 提分亮点1 -谚语As the saying goes, “...” 1.Reading makes a full man." 读书使人充实。 2.Read ten thousand books， travel ten thousand miles. 读万卷书，行万里路 提分亮点2 句式+高级短语 1. 形式主语it’s a good idea to 2. 动名词做主语Doing sth. is..... 3.高级短语 be willing to do sth.乐意做某事 as well as,也，除此之外 as long as只要 keep in mind牢记在心 put intro practice 付诸实践 提分亮点3 副词的小词大用 In a word, as long as I keep the plans in mind and put into practice, I truly believe that I will have a meaningful holiday. truly：真地 更能真切地表达情绪情感 同理： deeply strongly really 其他活动类拓展表达 1.travel with their family and relax themselves 2.take up some hobbies, such as cooking,planting and playing basketball. 3.be a volunteer and help people 4.give my old clothes to the poor area 5.work on a farm 佳句赏析 阅读： 1.As for the reason why I like reading, I think it can not only help me relax but also open up my eyes to the outside world. 至于我喜欢阅读的原因，我认为它不仅能帮助我放松，而且还能打开我通往外面世界的视野。 2.Reading books can bring me comfort, ... ...
