【精品解析】陕西·近5年中考英语真题分类汇编：书面表达

陕西·近5年中考英语真题分类汇编：书面表达 一、书面表达 1．（2023·陕西）假如你是李涛，你们学校英语社团正在开展以"感恩"为主题的征文活动。请你认真阅读以下通知，并按要求用英语写一篇短文，参加此次活动。 Notice Dear students, Fathers play a very important role in our life. Today is Father's Day. How will you thank him Please write a short passage about your plan. Here are some questions to help you. ●What do you want to say to him ●What are you going to do for him ●Why are you going to do that We are looking forward to your passage. School English Club 参考词汇: cook a meal, make a gift, take a walk with him, delicious, special,… 要求： 1. 短文必须包括所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计人总词数。） Today is Father's Day. 【答案】（第五档14分标准） Today is Father's Day. I want to do something meaningful for him. First, I will cook a meal for him. My father is very busy but he often makes delicious food for me. So I want to thank him and let him have a rest. Also, I plan to make a special gift by myself. I think he will like it. Last, I am going to take a walk with him. I can tell him interesting stories to make him happy. All in all, I really love my father. And I really want to say: "I love you, dad." （第四档12分标准） Today is Father's Day. I want to say: "Father, you are my hero. I love you very much." I want to do the following things to thank you. First, I want to cook a delicious meals for you because you're so busy to cook meals. Next, I want to make special gift myself for you. That's a beautiful card because I can write what I want say to you. At last, I really want take walk with you because exercise can make we health and strong. 【知识点】应用文写作 【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。根据所给的提示内容写一则关于父亲节的计划，写作中要包含所给的三方面的内容，想对父亲说的话，想为父亲做的事，以及为什么要这么做。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般将来时，人称主要是第一人称和第三人称单数，注意连词的使用以及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。 【点评】这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如 plan to ； by myself ；all in all 等以及句型结构，如I want to thank him and let him have a rest. I can tell him interesting stories to make him happy. 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅自然。 2．（2022·陕西）学校是个大家庭，这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以 "School Is a Big Family"为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要求，从结构图的三个方面写一篇英文演讲稿。 参考词汇: be patient (with), care about, encourage, share, help, understand, love, have fun, ... 要求: 1）可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥; 2）语句通顺,意思连贯，书写工整; 3）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4）词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。) Good afternoon, everyone! I am glad to be here to gi ... ...