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课件网) Unit 3 Celebrations Writing workshop An event description celebrations What celebrations do you know wedding graduation birthday festivals New term recovery funerals prize prepare party dinner clothes speech Lucky money fireworks gifts activities feelings overjoyed happy excited impressed awesome moved eager Step 1: pair-discussion What celebration do you want to write about and why What details do you want to include You are going to write about a celebration event that you have had before. Step 2: pare-writing Task1.Look at the picture and make a prediction: 1.What did they celebrate 2.How did they celebrate it 3.How did they feel Step 3: Read Para1 & para4 Topic Sentence Supporting Sentence 1 Supporting Sentence 2 Supporting Sentence 3 Conclusion Sentence How was the ady feelings wonderful wonderful It's a wonderful Birthday celebration... That day was awesome. It was Grandpa’s 70th birthday. Step 4: Read Para2 & 3 carefully Person 人称 The first person Tense 时态 The Simple Past tense Order 顺序 Time order Character 角色 Whole family The guests Step 4: Read Para2 & 3 carefully Order 顺序 Time order Tip1: To make our article more organized, we canfollow the time order. Early in the morning, I woke up excitd.First I got dressed quickly. Then I headed downstairs to help. Mum was already in the kitchen preparing Grandpa‘s special birthday lunch. Dad was nowhere to be seen.After a quick breakfast, I checked the special gift I had made for Grandpa, a video of his life story--for the last time. For weeks I had been working on these,listening toGrandpa’s stories,selecting his favorite music and collecting photos from the family album. Just before lunchtime,Dad came in with some guests. Surprisingly, there were Grandpa‘s best friends from secondary school, all in their seventies. Grandpa couldn’t believe his eyes and it took quite a long time for them to calm down As soon as the guests took their seats,Grandpa favorite nusic began to fill the room with memories of the old days. With each old photo, the guests saw how Grandpa grew from a handsome boy to a kind old gentleman.The best part came when Grandpa. Tip2: To make our article more attractive, we can describe some activities by using adj./adv.. What are these missing words What details did the author mention Time order Early in the morning... 1.woke up ...dressed ... 2.has already been preparing... After a quick breakfast... checked... listening..., selecting... and collecting.... Just before lunchtime... Dad came with...Grandpa couldn't believe.... As soon as the guests took seats... Music began to fill..Guests saw how... The best part came when... Tip 3: To make our article more vivid, we can describe some activities in detail by using verbs. Advanced writing skills climax高潮 awesome Mum and l prepare Dad was nowhere to be seen. lunchtime: guests came in Grandpa couldn’t believe his eyes The best part came when… wonderful s ... ...
