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课件网) fireworks Hong Kong shopping 4-D film a parade The day finally arrived. My parents and I left for the airport in the early morning. It took us about three and a half hours to fly to Hong Kong. The next day, we went to the most famous theme park–(1) _____. I loved watching the interesting(2)_____ of Disney characters, and the Space Mountain ride was very (3)_____. On the third day, we visited another famous theme park in Hong Kong—(4)_____.We watched the (5)_____ and the bird show there. They were great fun. On the fourth day, we visited some museums, and then we went (6)_____. My mother enjoyed that day most. She bought a lot of presents for our relatives and her friends. We went to a seafood restaurant on the fifth day and had a (7)_____ meal. The food in Hong Kong was really nice. We enjoyed this trip very much, and I hope I can visit it again some day. Disneyland parade exciting Ocean Park dolphin show shopping delicious Kitty’s best holiday Writing is a step-by-step process. Before writing What to do before writing While writing After writing My best holiday How to write the narration (记叙文) Think narration (记叙文) A trip on a holiday Organize her ideas Write about her trip When, where, who, what, how Main points Details Kitty’s trip to Hong Kong Organize Main points Details When The winter holiday Where Hong Kong Who My parents and I What Visiting places of interests Disneyland —parade of Disney characters —exciting Space Mountain ride Ocean Park —dolphin show and bird show Other activities Visited museums Went shopping Eating Delicious seafood How Enjoyed the trip Interesting, exciting, fun, nice Want to visit it again Organize her ideas Tip 1 : Fact file Make structure clearer (结构清晰） Organize Structure of Kitty’s article The day finally arrived. My parents and I left for the airport in the early morning. It took us about three and a half hours to fly to Hong Kong. The next day, we went to the most famous theme park–Disneyland. I loved watching the interesting parade of Disney characters, and the Space Mountain ride was very exciting. On the third day, we visited another famous theme park in Hong Kong—Ocean Park. We watched the dolphin show and the bird show there. They were great fun. On the fourth day, we visited some museums, and then we went shopping. My mother enjoyed that day most. She bought a lot of presents for our relatives and her friends. We went to a seafood restaurant on the fifth day and had a delicious meal. The food in Hong Kong was really nice. We enjoyed this trip very much, and I hope I can visit it again some day. Para. 1 Para. 2 Para. 3 Para. 4 Para. 5 Para. 6 Introduce the time, the place and the character. The key words & the topic sentences can be helpful. When, Where, Who Para. 2--5 Main body Main point Details Details Main point Details Main point Talk about the places to go, the activities to do and the food to eat. What Main point ... ...
