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课件网) UNIT 6 THE ADMIRABLE Section Ⅴ Writing 1.通过阅读熟悉概要写作的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。（语言能力，学习能力） 2.了解概要写作的技巧,写好概要写作。（语言能力） 概 要 写 作 本单元的写作任务是写一篇概要。概要写作是读写结合的题型,既考查学生理解文章主旨和段落中心的能力,又考查学生用正确的语法形式、合适的语言表达主旨的能力。概要写作一般以自然段为基础概括要点。有些段落有主题句,学生需要对主题句进行改写和调整,有些段落没有明显的主题句,需要学生自己归纳要点。通常的步骤如下: 1.通读文章,把文章分成几部分； 2.用一两个涵盖关键信息的句子概括每一部分； 3.避免加入事例和解释性的部分； 4.避免加入自己的观点； 5.注意衔接词的使用。 探究点1 教材范例提炼 课文范例 素材积累 Ⅰ.常用词汇 1.highlight the great importance of 强调……的重要性 2.against one's will 违心地 3.one after another 相继 4.take a correct attitude to/towards 对……采取正确的态度 5.attract one's attention 引起某人的注意 6.make the best of 充分利用 Ⅱ.话题句式 ★精彩开头 1.The author highlights the importance of encouraging students. 作者强调了鼓励学生的重要性。 2.The passage argues that we must value not only those who come first or are the best in a field but also those whose efforts push others to success. 这篇文章认为，我们不仅要重视那些在某一领域名列前茅的人，而且要重视那些努力推动其他人走向成功的人。 ★正文佳句 1.People who talk and sing to plants have no mental problems at all, according to an agricultural expert. 一位农业专家表示，对着植物说话和唱歌的人根本没有精神问题。 2.Laughter Yoga was invented by Madan Kataria, a doctor in Mumbai, India. Laughter includes forced laughter and real laughter， which both lead to a feeling of happiness. 大笑瑜伽是由印度孟买的医生马丹·卡塔利亚发明的。笑包括强迫的笑和真正的笑。它们都能带来幸福感。 ★余味结尾 1.Fortunately，people still have a lot of time to do other things apart from work，though it may take some efforts. 幸运的是，虽然需要付出一些努力，但是人们除了工作之外还有很多时间做其他事情。 2.However, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system. 然而，一些科学家认为，接触一些泥土对我们的免疫系统有益。 探究点2 写作应用体验 写作典例 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Speed is very important in avalanche （雪崩） rescues. There will be narrow chances to escape if a skier is buried for 30 minutes or more. Now that 30 minutes can mean the difference between life and death for a skier lost on a snowy mountain, most people would depend on life-saving dogs. Noble works as a rescue team member in a vacation land, California. He tells us, “Dogs run fastest when an accident happens.” His partner Wylee, a life-saving dog, can search an accident scene the size of a football field. It only needs 5 to 10 minutes. However, 5 rescue team members have to spend a couple of hours in the same area. Apart from its excellent speed, Noble chooses Wylee as his partner partly because it weighs only about half what other kinds of dogs weigh. Rescue team members ha ... ...
