2024届广东省高三下学期二模英语读后续写精讲讲义素材

广东省二模读后续写精讲 Step 1：阅读材料 - 找出矛盾（要解决的问题），主线情节 - 找到主人公的诉求，主线情节 - 找到可以点明、反衬、暗示某种品质的句子 - 找到值得庆祝、纪念和令人悲伤、后悔的事情 - 找到是否有值得主人公反思、牢记的（某个亲人、朋友、同学、老师说的）话，在续写中呼应 - 找到是否有值得主人公怀念的情形 - 掠过次要情节 材料 When I was seven years old,my family moved from Mexico to America. In Mexico, I was a cheerful girl who loved making people laugh with my jokes and inventing fun games to play with my friends.However,when I arrived in America,I found it hard to fit in【矛盾、问题所在：难以融入】,and I became quieter. We lived in a small house with a modest yard where we grew vegetables—my responsibility.While I took pride in watching them grow,there were times when I dreamed of having a beautiful garden like my schoolmate Luella's【主人公诉求】,with its delicate tulips (郁金 香).Although Luella lived in the same neighborhood as me,we barely knew each other It was after a tornado that Luella and I finally became close friends.【联想：作者想要一个和Luella ‘s家花园一样的花园，经过了tornado两个人还成为了好朋友 ——— 那么两个人大概率是在花园这件事上互相帮助，或者其中一方帮助了另一方】 The tornado struck on a Sunday afternoon.The gentle breeze transformed into a strong wind,and thick gray clouds filled the sky.Gradually,the tornado took shape, starting as a thin rope and growing into a large black funnel(漏斗) .My entire family gathered in the bathroom,seeking shelter from the storm.Terrified,I sat close to my mom,knees in my chest. After the storm had passed,our worries and fears were replaced by relief that we were unharmed and that our house had remained undamaged.【掠过次要情节：灾难前后过程，不重要，因为重点写的是“after tornado两个人如何成为好朋友”】 As I stepped outside, I witnessed the extent of the damage the tornado had caused to our neighborhood【是Luella的花园遭受了损失，所以大概率是主人公帮助了Luella】. Across the street,a tall tree had fallen, crushing Luella's garden in front of her yellow house.We hurried over to check on it.Fortunately,her family seemed to be away at the time,and no one was injured. However, her once-beautiful garden was in ruins, with the fallen tree destroying the tulips and debris(碎片)spread everywhere. I could only imagine how heartbroken they must feel seeing this. 1.Then my mom's usual words rang in my ear,"It is more blessed to give than to receive,”【值得主人公牢记的话 - 一般需要在续写中呼应 ——— 但是考虑到这句话和本文主旨“友谊、互助”没什么关系，所以可以呼应，也可以不呼应 ——— 我个人觉得还是不呼应好，不然太刻意了 ——— 但如果真的点了，写通顺也可以】and my family started to think about how we could help. Just at that moment,Luella's family returned in their car. Even after the debris was cleared,I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost garden. Step 2：分析续写两句话 1.第二段第一句“after the debris was cleared”，说明第一段“我”帮助了Luella’s family清理院子 2.第一段，Luella回来之后看 ... ...