专题10 中考高分写作 知识点：中考高分作文的特征 1. 清晰的分段，头尾两段比较简洁明了，中间内容可以详细描述。明确时态和文章的体裁，有时候会穿插不同的时态在文章中，特别是是描述个人的一段经历时要用到一般过去时，作文体裁考察书信体、邮件、记叙某件事情、描写某个人居多。 例如这样一篇材料是目前中考比较容易考察的类型： 生活是一位睿智的长者，生活是一位博学的老师。生活需要我们用心面对，无论是美好还是意外，我们都要记得微笑和感恩。请以“Life is full of”为题写一篇短文，分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历。 内容包括：1. 请先将标题填写完整；2. 分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历；3. 谈谈你的感悟。 Life is full of challenges Life will be wonderful with all kinds of challenges. It is the challenges that make me stronger. （开头段比较简洁，点明主题“生活充满挑战，但挑战让我更坚强。”） I moved to the city when I entered the middle school. But my problem was that no one cooked for me because my parents came home late, so I made up my mind to learn how to cook. I must challenge myself. Then one day I watched my parents cooking dinner carefully. They taught me how to cook. A few days later, I learned to cook for myself. Now I am happy I can cook delicious food. My parents are satisfied with me. I am also proud of myself. （中间段主要分享自己的一段特殊经历，这里一定要围绕主题去展开故事的讲解，并且要提到现在自己的改变有哪些。） I learned from it that we may meet some difficulties in our life, but if we have confidence and are good at learning, everything will be better. I am so eager to meet the coming difficulties, I won’t give up no matter how hard they will be. （结尾段谈谈个人的感悟，这个时候需要重新说明一下主题，并且提到遇到挑战个人会怎么应对。） 2. 适当运用英语中的定语从句、状语从句和宾语从句这大句式以及what引导的主语从句和it作为形式主语和形式宾语的句式。同时，感叹句和强调句也可以使用。 例如： Her smile is so bright that she won the heart of mine when I first met her.（so ….that引导结果状语从句；when引导时间状语从句） Besides, it is important for us to keep safety rules in mind, especially when we row a boat or play in the amusement park.（it作形式主语，“It is +adj. for sb. to do sth.”句型） It’s my great honor to inform you that we will go to the Slender West Lake in Yangzhou for a study tour next Wednesday.（it作形式主语，It is +名词+to do sth） You may find it difficult to make friends with people who always have doubts about you. (it作形式宾语，sb find it +adj+to do sth) Mary is always ready to help others who get into trouble.（who引导定语从句） Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself.（what引导主语从句） I think the Expo Park is not only an exhibition of gardens, but also the pride of Xuzhou’s development.（“not only...but also...”结构） If I have the chance to be a member of the club, I’ll be happy.（if引导条件状语从句） As for me, I think being a leader can help me learn how to arrange things properly, which means a lot to me.（动名词作主语，which引导非限制性定语从句） What a wonderful experience!（what引导感叹句） I learned from it that ... ...
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