Unit 6 Electricity 单元话题满分范文必背 1．每年都有很多人在交通事故中受伤或失去生命，因此确保交通安全极为重要。请根据图示，写一篇短文，介绍如何确保交通安全。词数80左右。 注意事项：1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Every year many people get hurt or lose their lives in traffic accidents. _____ 【答案】例文 Every year many people get hurt or lose their lives in traffic accidents. It’s very important to keep safe on the street. Here’s some advice. First, we must obey traffic rules. We should wear helmets when riding bikes. Don’t cross the street when traffic light is red. Second, we must never play on the street or we may have an accident. Third, it’s good to help children and old people cross the street. Last, in case of an accident, we should know how to give first aid. In short, the best way to be safe is to be careful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何确保交通安全，可适当发挥，注意条理清晰，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，通过表达在街上保持安全是很重要的来引出确保交通安全的建议； 第二步，具体介绍确保交通安全的建议； 第三步，书写结语，进行总结。 [亮点词汇] ①in case of以防 ②in short简言之 ③first aid急救 [高分句型] ①It’s very important to keep safe on the street. (it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语) ②Don’t cross the street when traffic light is red. (when引导时间状语从句) 2．请以“Home rules to save electricity”为题写一篇短文，词数80左右。应包括以下信息点： 1. 举例说明电对人们的日常生活很重要； 2. 尽量使用节能灯泡（energy saving bulb）； 3. 夏天开空调的时候不要忘记关窗； 4. 人离开的时候不要让灯一直亮着。 【点拨】 谋篇布局 1. 人称：第一、三人称 2. 时态：一般现在时 好词 1. for example例如 2. free sb. from sth.从某事中解放某人 3. if possible如果可能的话 4. in the long run从长远看 5 not only…but also…不仅……而且…… 好句 1. It is necessary for us to save electricity.对我们来说，节约用电是重要的。 2. Don’t leave the lights on all the time.不要让灯一直亮着。 3. If we can do as I mentioned, …如果我们能像我提到的这样做，…… 牛刀小试 Home rules to save electricity _____ 【答案】例文 Home rules to save electricity Electricity is very useful and important in our daily lives. It makes our life more convenient. For example, washing machines free us from hard work. Air conditioners can keep us cool in hot days. But without electricity, these machines can’t work. So it is necessary for us to save electricity. Here are some rules to save electricity at home. We should try to use energy-saving bulbs instead. In this way, we can save electricity. Also, remember to close the windows when the air conditioners are on, or it will waste the energy. Don’t leave the lights on when nobody is at home. Turn all the lights off before we leave. When we are watching TV, try to turn the lights off if possible. If we can do the things above, we can save a lot of electricity ... ...
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