(
课件网) 高中英语应用文： 发布网络评论 你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：_____ _____ This online concert is absolutely fantastic! 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Step1:明确交际用途(Clear) Step2:分解题干要点(Correct) Step3:包含所有要点 Brainstorming 你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括： 1.音乐会特点； 2.观看感受； 3.意见或建议。 This online concert is absolutely fantastic! 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 绿苔私家英语 Step4:分块构思内容 内容1:音乐会特点+音乐会的特色内容 (P50-51) Chinese traditionaf,classical music,country music,hip-hop,techno music,orchestral music_弦乐(wind instrument风管乐器，stringed instrument玄乐器),etc. different languages different music styles different culturesonline (From the video)Traditional Chinese insturments:钟、磬[qìng]、埙xūn]、鼓、古筝、古琴、琵琶、二胡、阮[ruǎn]、竹笛、箫、笙[shēng]、木鱼等。 内容1:音乐会特点+ 音乐会的特色内容 It featured dazzling stringed instruments like western violin and Chinese erhu and sentimental performance from both China and Britain. In stead of being noisy and loud, this concert turned out to be lyric e and melodious: The moon over a Fountain Chinese classic pieces, such as" The Butter fly lovers" even brought tears to the audience' s eyes and received a standing ovation in the end. step 4: 分块构思 内容2:观看感受 必修二 Unit3 The Internet (教材P28)One of the greatest benefits of the Internet was its ability to remove the distance that usually exists between people. One of the greatest benefits of the online concert was itsability to remove the distance that exists between we Chinese students and our sister-school friends in Britain. The concert offered a great platform to connect studentsand teachers of the two schools through music despitethe physical distance between us. step 4: 分块构思 内容2:观看感受 必修二Unit 5 Music (教材P49)“Music is the universal language of mankind.” (教材P56) Music gives me happiness.When I listened to music, it made my spirit fly like a kite in the wind.Music gave me strength and brought me; relief. It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those;hard times. Moreover,music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction. It became my best friend. It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part; of my being. step 4: 分块构思 内容2: 观看感受 必修二Unit5 Music(教材P52) The virtual choir is a wonderful way for people around the world to sing with; one voice and thus make the world a better place. Undoubtedly,this online concert is a wonderful way for people from and China to appreciate the music Britain with one heart, thus making the world a better place abouf the online concert. step 4: 分块构思 " Butterfly lovers” " Romeo and Juliet" The friends from the UK played Shakespeare' masterpiece " Romeo and Juliet”. we play ... ...
