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课件网) 读后续写微技能(二)--How to make the action description more vivid？ Tip 1: Add vivid verbs(语料库:句子优化表达) Tip 2: Add action chains (动作链: 让动作有过程) Tip 3: Add action range(动作面:身体动作细节描写) Tip 1：Add vivid verbs (精致措辞—具体替代笼统) “说”：whisper / murmur低语，stutter结巴，declare宣布，promise保证， propose / suggest建议，cry out / shout / scream / yell / exclaim / howl大声叫喊，roar咆哮，sigh叹息，add补充说 “看”：catch a glance of 瞥一眼/ stare at / gaze at 凝视/ glare at 怒 视/ glue one's eyes to盯着; sb can't take one's eyes off 无法将视线移 开 cast a meaningful/suspicious look at sb 意味深长地/怀疑地看着 blink 眨眼 look sb in the eye 直视 “走”：walk/stroll散步, tiptoe /creep蹑手蹑脚地走，slip, steal into溜走， march 齐步走stride/prance 阔步走pace 踱步limp 蹒跚 “抓”：seize / grasp / grab / clutch / take hold of / catch hold of / hold on to “跑”：rush/dash/race猛冲, 急速移动；flee away 逃跑 “跳”spring / jump to one's feet 一跃而起, 跳起；rise to one's feet站 起来 “哭”：weep, sob (啜泣) “吃”：bite (咬) chew(咀嚼) swallow (吞下) wolf down (狼吞虎咽) 例句： 1.She _____ out of bed and _____ to the window. slipped tiptoed 2.He jumped off the bus and _____ the nearest hospital. dashed forward 3.I used to get up at 6 o'clock in the morning , take a 3-minute shower, _____ wolf down 4.some bread and _____ to school. hit the road 5.They _____ along the riverbank, enjoying the evening sun. strolled 6.An old tramp(流浪汉)_____ along the street, looking for money or cigarette ends. Tip 2：Add action chains(分解—合并_____—美化) limped 类型1：主语+谓语A,B and C. 动作链一般以三连动为主，多个动作一气呵成，紧凑而有节奏感， 使得描写非常生动。 [注意]动作链的三个或者以上的动作，必须在时态上保持一致，常常采 用A, B and C的格式。 我参加颁奖仪式的上台动作: 面带微笑—走上舞台—骄傲地挺起胸膛 I wore a smile on my face, strode onto the stage and puffed out my chest with pride. 获奖后老师对我的赞扬的动作：朝我眨眼睛—竖起了大拇指—绽放笑容 I was greeted by my teacher's smiling eyes. “Well done!” he blinked at me, gave me a thumbs-up and broadened a radiant(灿烂的) smile. [注意] 也可以加上介词词组或者副词对动作进行美化： _____： with delight / excitement / pleasure/ happiness / joy / satisfaction / anger / rage / patience / fear / terror / embarrassment / pride / caution / care / patience / certainty _____ ： with his bright eyes / its sharp teeth / her shaky hand / her pale lips… with + 情感名词的搭配 with+身体部位 _____ ： in surprise / amazement / shock / sorrow伤心 in a high / low / sweet / loud / soft / weak voice 用..的嗓音 in a tone of surprise / curiosity / impatience / regret /command 用… 的语气 _____ suddenly /immediately /instantly / rapidly / firmly / slowly / angrily / happily / excitedly _____, she dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her daughter into her arms tightly. in+名词 副词 With a giant smile on her face He pulled my face towards him _____ ... ...
