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课件网) 读后续写动作描写之动作链与动作面得构建 PART ONE 01 构造动作“链” 动作“链”与动作“面” 动词是英语语言中的主角，很多语句都包含有动作的描写。但我们在描写动作的时候往往会有个毛病，那就是动作描写太过于单薄。那么如何将动作构建的饱满呢 要想动作描写写得生动而有画面感，主要两种思路：构建“动作链”与“动作面”。 动作链：把一个动作结果拆分成一连串得细微动作，让动作描写既丰富又生动。 动作面：同一个场景，多镜头描述，把不同得镜头剪接在一起。构成一个饱满得动作画面。 对比动作描写 1.He took a taxi to the police station. 2. He flagged down(挥手示停) a taxi, jumped in with a suitcase and said to the driver, "Go to the police." 构造动作链句式: 1、主语+动作A+动作B and 动作C（三个并列谓语，动作依次发生） 2、Having done…, 主谓宾（表示先做了某事，再发生核心动作） 【示例】He took a taxi to the police station. 分解成动作链：他拦下一辆的士，拿着手提箱跳进去冲着司机说，“去警局” He stopped a taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and told the driver, “Go to the police station, please.” 例句1：The singer began to sing. 翻译：歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。 【仿写1】The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing. 例句2：The boys jumped into the lake to play. 翻译：男孩们兴奋地跑到湖边，脱下衣服，跳入湖中玩耍。 【仿写2】The boys excitedly rushed to the lake, quickly took off their clothes and jumped into the water to play. 例句3：She hugged her son tightly. 翻译：她冲上前，跪下，把儿子抱在怀里。 【仿写3】She dashed forward without hesitation, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms tightly. 【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。 Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left. 例句1：After having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out. 翻译：排了三个小时队后，他被告知票卖完了。 【仿写1】Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out. 例句2：：She wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, then she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. 翻译：她在街上漫无目的地逛了好几个小时，感到有点饿，想吃点东西。 【仿写2】Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. 例句3：：After he told the truth, he felt at ease in his mind and returned home with a lighter heart. 翻译：说出真相后、他心里轻松了很多、心情放松地回家了。 【仿写3】Having told the truth, he felt at ease in his mind and returned home with a lighter heart. PART TWO 02 编织动作“面” 对比画面描写 1.It was an unforgettable time. 2. Gathering around the campfire, they feasted on BBQ, enjoying the unforgettable moment. 编织动作面句式:（应用好非谓语动词） ①Doing...，主句，doing... ② Done...，主句，doing... ③主句，doing...and doing... ④（With）...doing／done...，主句，doing... ①Doing...，主句，doing... 例句：他们站在空旷的路边；仰望着天空；感受着这份珍贵的平静。 Standing beside the empty road, they looked up into the sky, feeling ... ...
