(
课件网) 情景交融 借物抒情 高考读后续写巧妙结尾课堂导学案 考试大纲写作要求 要求考生根据题示进行书面表达，例如根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要，根据文字或图表信息写短文或报告，根据提示叙述事情、表达观点和态度等。考生的表达应该∶ ①内容清楚、连贯; ②结构完整; ③逻辑性强; ④主题突出; ⑤用词及文体恰当。 巧妙结尾：主题鲜明 结构完整 学习目标任务 记忆背诵相关词汇、短语和句子表达； 准确区别主语为人和主语为物的词块； 把握情景交融和错物抒情的场景和场合； 熟练运用情景交融和借物抒情简单句和高级句式。 借助某些具体特定物品或景色，委婉曲折地将某种感情、志向表达出来，达到写作目的。 理解 & 分析 场景 & 寓意 Its golden rays were warming me and driving away my shadows in my heart. Its bright light was feeling my face and directing me to move on. Its beautiful light was inspiring me and giving me warm to move on. ①the morning/ early/ rising sun; the evening/ setting sun ②sb catch sight of/ look up at ③sb walk/ stand/ bath in the light of ④sth guide/ direct me /lead me/ warm me to move on ⑤sth cast/ throw light/ rays/ shadows on ⑥sth shine in the sky/ twinkle in the darkness/ fall on my face ⑦in the light of sunshine 词汇 & 短语 I looked at the morning sun/ the moon/ the stars/ the morning sun in the sky. It was rising/ setting down/ twinkling behind the trees. Its beauty was warming me, falling down on my face, inspiring me, directing me in the darkness, giving me confidence, and driving away my shadows in my heart. I walked to school. A strong ray of sunshine cast light on me. Its bright light was inspiring me and directing me in the darkness to move on. In the light of the sunshine/ under the rays of the moon walked the small boy! It was setting down behind the trees. Its light was warming me and driving away my shadows in my heart. 语境运用简单句表达 When I turned around, I looked at the morning sun/ the moon/ the stars rising/ shining/ twinkling/ setting down behind the trees, with its beauty inspiring me/ warming me/ directing me/ throwing light on me/ falling on my face/ clearing my heart/ giving me courage to move on. Turning around, I walked home under the stars/ the moon/ the sun in the sky, its beauty inspiring and giving me courage to move on. When I turned around to walk home, a strong ray of the sun/ the moon/ the stars was flooding into my heart, with its beauty inspiring and giving me courage to move on. In the rays of the sunshine walked the small boy, its beauty inspiring and giving me courage to move on. 语境中简单句升级高级句式 I turned around and caught sight of my mother waving to me, her small body inspiring me and giving me enough confidence to move on. I turned around. In the rays of the setting sun stood my mother, with her bright smile warming me and driving away all the fright inside my heart. I tried to hold back my tears and opened the gift on the desk in front of me, the beautiful voice clearing all the sorrows in my heart and giving me enough confidence to move on. Trying to hol ... ...
