(
课件网) 南开中学第七次质量检测应用文讲义 原题： 假定你是李华，上个月你和外国朋友Jackson一起参加了打卡山城 的City walk 活动。 他回国后给你发来了照片，请你给他回一封邮件， 内容包括： 1.感谢分享照片； 2.回顾活动时光； 3.邀请来渝再聚。 tip：打卡山城：Check out Mountain City。 思路： 撰写这篇英语作文的思路可以分为以下几个步骤，以确保内容既 完整又富有条理： 1. 引言段落：感谢分享照片 开头直接对Jackson分享照片表示感谢。 表达收到照片后的喜悦和激动，为邮件营造一个温馨友好的开场。 ? Your email was a delightful surprise, brightening my day with memories of our shared adventure. Thank you for sending those moments our way. ? Receiving the photos from our City Walk was like reliving those joyous moments all over again. I can't thank you enough for sharing a piece of our journey together. ? I was overjoyed to receive your email filled with photos from our City Walk. Each image was a portal back to those joyful days. ? Seeing the pictures you shared was like being transported back to those incredible moments we experienced together. Thank you for reviving those memories. ? Your photos arrived as a wonderful reminder of our shared adventure, instantly brightening my mood and bringing a broad smile to my face. ? Receiving your photos brought a wave of nostalgia and joy, instantly transporting me back to our unforgettable City Walk. ? Seeing those snapshots filled me with gratitude, vividly reminding me of our shared adventures and laughter. ? Having the chance to relive our City Walk through your lens has been a true delight, reigniting cherished memories. ? Opening your email to find the photos waiting inside was like opening a treasure chest of our shared moments. ? Feeling the warmth and happiness from our trip all over again, thanks to your thoughtful sharing of those wonderful photos, has been a highlight of my day. 2. 主体段落：回顾活动时光 回顾参加打卡山城City Walk活动的经历和亮点，如探索特定的地 标、享受地道美食、体验当地文化等(描述一些具体的、共同经历的有 趣或感人的瞬间，使用生动的细节来唤起对方的回忆)。可以通过对比 照片中的场景与个人记忆中的情景，强化这些经历给双方带来的情感 联结。 ? As I scrolled through the photos, I was reminded of the laughter that echoed through the streets of Mountain City, a testament to the joy we found at every corner. ? Recalling our ascent to the city's vantage points, where the entire landscape lay before us like a vast, unfolding canvas, brings a sense of awe and gratitude. ? Each photo, a frozen moment in time, speaks volumes of our camaraderie, from the shared meals that introduced us to new flavors to the unexpected rain that had us seeking shelter and sharing stories. ? Walking through the bustling streets and serene paths of Mountain City with you was an unforgettable adventure. The laughter we shared and the breathtaking views we witnessed together are etched in my memory. ? One moment that stands out to me was when we reached the summit of that hill, and the pan ... ...
