-2024届高三英语二轮复习微专题：读后续写结尾 讲义

微专题--读后续写结尾 一、自然式结尾： 自然结尾是顺着文中所续之事的自然发展，以它的必然结果做结尾。没有套话，没有空话，简单，自然。可使文章的结构显得十分完整。作为读后续写的文章，常常不一定含有某种深刻的道理，这时只要将故事补充完整就足够了。因此自然式结尾，是续写故事中最常见的结尾方式。 例1：......with gratitude gratitude, we bid farewell to this kind woman,setting out on our journey home. 例2(场景结尾)：Finally the time came! He took out the soda tin（汽水罐） , poured the coins out and began to count. Five dollars! His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy brooch(饰针). The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he ran back home and placed it in Dora's hair .Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms with tears welling up in her eyes. 二、哲理式结尾 哲理式结尾往往总结出文章的中心思想并用客观语言表述，它能使作文具有一定的思想含量，能给读者送去一份宝贵的精神财富。他可以通过以小见大，从物到人，由事及理，从点到面，由一及众的方式升华文章主题。哲理虽然占的篇幅小，但它常常是一件平凡的小事，变得耐人寻味，熠熠生辉，起到画龙点睛的效果。 例1：It was then that Lucy really understood “Roses given ,fragrance in hand.” 例2：我和儿子的生活很拮据，但是当我看到路边无家可归的人时，感到心痛，有挣扎，最终还是给了他五美元。我的举动最终也影响了儿子的故事。文章旨在告诉我们要常怀仁爱之心，给予他人力所能及的帮助。续写结尾的部分可以基于故事主题意义进行升华，如There are always blessings to count if we open our eyes and we always have the opportunity to be a blessing for someone else.如果我们睁开眼睛，我们总会有机会成为别人的祝福。 呼应式结尾： 与材料中的细节呼应，不一定是开头。 例1：前文细节：妈妈让女儿帮助她的同学，说“ If you do a good turn, you will only get good in return.”结尾：As fate would have it, the little help turned into a lifelong friendship showcasing that if you do a good turn, you will only get good in return.如果你做好事，你就会有好报。 例2：前文细节：我的父亲再婚了，Jen是继母的女儿，我因她们的到来感到不开心，因为我觉得他们打破了我和爸爸的二人小分队。但是后来我发现他们母女也经历了很多困难。不再为自己感到难过，我也想让Jen开心一些。 续写细节构建：前文细节1雪很厚，Jen喜欢火鸡，结尾的呼应是我们堆了火鸡雪人。前文细节2，我和父亲的二人小分队被打破了，结尾呼应，我们四人形成了新的队伍。 结尾：A sense of happiness welled up in my heart and surged through me.“I guess we can be a good team ，”. I said to myself, “thanks to the snow Turkey.” 四、景情合一式结尾 在读后续写中，把真切的感受融入所写的景物之中，使景物具有浓厚的思想和情感蕴含，从而达到不言情而情无限，言有尽而意无穷的效果。学生可以根据文章特点，在结尾处融入景色描写，抒发自己的感情。下面是一些景情合一的佳句，供大家欣赏。 1.Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery,we headed it for the destination . 2.Though it was snowing heavily outside they just couldn't stop the warmth filling up the whole room. 3. I managed to smile back while the wind was dancing around us and I felt lucky to be alive. 4. ... ...