2024中考英语书面表达热点话题之环境保护类（含分析）

2024中考英语书面表达热点话题之环境保护类 1．（2024·陕西西安·二模）假如你是李明，你们学校校报正在就“绿色环保，人人有责”这一话题征文。请你根据下面征稿启事中的提示问题写一篇英语短文，参加此次投稿活动。 提示： 参考词汇：pollution, cut down, protect, public transportation, instead of, rubbish, recycle, cloth bag,… 要求：1. 参考提示信息，选择使用提示词，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Hello! I’m Li Ming. I want to share my opinions about environment protection here. _____ 【范文】 Hello! I’m Li Ming. I want to share my opinions about environment protection here. As we can see, our environment is badly damaged by what we human beings have done. The polluted water, air and food have a great effect on our health. Therefore, it’s high time that everyone should try their best to do what they can to protect the environment. As middle school students, we also can do a lot of things for the environment. First of all, we should protect the environment by saving energy, including turning off electrical equipment and taps in time. In addition, we must contact environmental protection departments secretly if we find factories are polluting our environment. Above all, we should also plant more trees and travel green. As for me, I often go to school by bike to protect the environment. Besides, I pick up rubbish in the park on weekends. In a word, the effort from everybody can make a great difference to our world. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍我们面临的问题以及原因； 第二步，具体阐述解决问题的办法以及你是如何帮助保护环境的； 第三步，最后表达总结。 [亮点词汇] ①in addition此外 ②above all最重要的是，尤其是 ③in a word总而言之 ④make a great difference产生巨大的影响 [高分句型] ①As we can see, our environment is badly damaged by what we human beings have done.（as引导的定语从句，what引导的宾语从句） ②Therefore, it’s high time that everyone should try their best to do what they can to protect the environment.（what引导的宾语从句） ③In addition, we must contact environmental protection departments secretly if we find factories are polluting our environment.（if引导的条件状语从句） 2．（2024·北京房山·一模）环境就是民生，青山就是美丽，蓝天也是幸福。 假如你是李华，你们学校英语社团公众号正在进行以“低碳生活（Low-carbon Life）”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对低碳生活的看法和做法。 提示词语：important, save, plant, reuse, bicycle 提示问题：What do you think of low-carbon life What do you often do to practice low-carbon life _____ 【范文】 Living a Low-carbon life is important for everyone. We should save energy. To help with the environment, I live a low-carbon life. I always walk or ride a bicycle to school instead of taking a car. Beside ... ...