Unit 6 Outdoor fun 满分范文（含解析）

Unit 6 Outdoor fun 单元满分范文必背 1．请根据以下提示，以 “My Favorite Outdoor Activity” 为题，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文。 (1) 我最喜欢的户外运动是野营； (2) 原因：省钱，对健康有益；待在户外可以欣赏美丽的湖光山色； (3) 曾经 (once) 有一次在海边野营…… (4) 本周末如果有空，我打算邀请我的几个好友一起去野营。 My Favorite Outdoor Activity _____ 【答案】例文： My Favorite Outdoor Activity My favorite outdoor activity is camping. It’s very cheap and it’s good for my health. I can stay outside and enjoy the beautiful lakes and hills. Once, I went camping by the sea. The sunrise was so beautiful. I enjoyed nice food and drinks. The camping really brought me a lot of fun. If I am free this weekend, I will invite my good friends to go camping with me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己最喜欢的户外活动”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，介绍自己最喜欢的户外活动是野营； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢野营的原因； 第三步，分享自己的一次野营经历与接下来的野营计划。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of 很多 ②go camping 去野营 [高分句型] ①It’s very cheap and it’s good for my health.（and连接并列句） ②If I am free this weekend, I will invite my good friends to go camping with me.（if引导条件状语从句） 2．请根据下面的故事梗概，发挥想象力，以“Two little pigs”为题写一则小故事。要求：80个词左右。 时间：从前 地点：森林里 人物：幸福的猪妈妈和两只小猪 情节：两只小猪长大了，猪妈妈决定让他们走出森林，到城市里看一看…… Two little pigs _____ 【答案】例文 Two little pigs Once upon a time, there were two little pigs. One was black and the other was white. They lived happily with their mother in the forest. When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest and look around the city. And then they left home with some food. When they got to the city, they noticed people in the city were not really happy. So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； 提示：故事梗概已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍两只小猪”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“时间、地点、人物、情节等”几个方面重点介绍两只小猪的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“它们享受着它们的生活”。 [亮点词汇] ①once upon a time以前 ②grow up长大 ③enjoy one’s life享受某人的生活 [高分句型] ①When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest and look around the city.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②When they got to the city, they noticed people in the city were not really happy.（when引导的时间状语从句） 3．假如你是约翰，上周你的学校举行了风筝节（Kite Festival），请用英语写一封电子邮件把你的经历告诉你的笔友爱德华。词数80左右(已给出的部分不计入总词数)。 提示： 1.上周我们在黄山湖公园（the Huangshan Lake Park）举行了风筝节； 2.我们花了一小时走到公园。进入公园后，我们朝沙滩走去； 3.抬头一看，天上有 ... ...