Unit 1 Could you please clean your room？ Section B (3a-3b) 写作素养进阶 主题分析———指明方向 主题: 人与自我之做人与做事, 涉及子主题“劳动实践, 劳动品质” 内容: 1. 发表自己的见解, 说明自己是否应该做家务; 2. 记述一次帮父母做家务的经历, 并谈一谈自己的感受。 指导: 1. 谈论观点时, 正确使用情态动词; 2. 叙述经历时正确使用一般过去时。 典例研磨———示范引领 家务是生活中的一部分, 我们应该学会分担家务。请以“Doing Housework Makes Me ———为题, 用英语写一篇短文, 叙述你做家务的一次经历, 并谈谈你的体会。 要求: 词数不少于60个。 Step 1 三定审题 1. 定人称: 以第一人称为主 2. 定时态: 以一般过去时为主 3. 定核心: 介绍自己做家务的经历及体会 Step 2 谋篇布局 Step 3 润色成篇 Doing Housework Makes Me Happy It’s necessary to share housework with other family members. I’d like to tell you one of my experiences. ① Last Mother’s Day, I made a special dinner for my mom. ② It didn’t work as well as I thought. I hurt my fingers while cutting carrots, and I forgot to put the salt in the dishes. When my mom came back home, she was happy to taste them. Then she hugged me and said, “Good girl! ” From this experience, I’ve learned doing housework can not only help me grow up, but also bring happiness to my family. ③ ①开篇点题, 介绍自己做家务的经历。 ②段首使用了段落主题句, 自然引入细节描写。 ③通过表达收获与感悟, 自然收篇结尾, 使文章结构紧凑完整; 句中not only. . . but also的使用, 充分体现了作者深厚的英语语言功底。 实战写作———迁移创新 在英语课上, 老师组织全班同学开展有关“做家务”的讨论。假设以下是你的小组所做的讨论记录, 请根据这个记录用英语向全班作一个汇报。 Name Housework Wu Jun clean up rooms Jia Mei help her mom cook dinner Wang Ping wash clothes I . . . 要求: 1. 汇报内容要包括你和同学所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法; 2. 70词左右, 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Now let me tell you about the discussion in our group. _____ _____ _____ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【参考范文】 Now let me tell you about the discussion in our group. Wu Jun cleans up rooms on weekends and Jia Mei likes helping her mom cook dinner. Wang Ping sometimes washes clothes for her family. As for me, I usually help my father water flowers. In my opinion, it is necessary for us to do some chores. By doing that, we can help our parents and understand them better. We can learn to take care of ourselves. And we can also relax ourselves from hard work and develop our independence. That’s all. Thanks for listening! 2
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