Unit 3　What were you doing when the rainstorm came？ Section B (3a-3b) 学案（含答案） 2024-2025学年英语鲁教版八年级上册

Unit 3　What were you doing when the rainstorm came？ Section B (3a-3b) 写作素养进阶 主题分析———指明方向 主题: 人与自我之生活与学习, 涉及子主题“勤学善思” 内容: 记叙过去的活动或发生的事件 指导: 1. 正确使用一般过去时和过去进行时。 2. 写人时, 关注人物的身份、经历和事迹。 3. 叙事时, 关注事情发生的前因后果及发展过程。 典例研磨———示范引领 　　在你的生活中有哪些经历是难以忘怀的 当事情发生的时候你又在做什么呢 请你根据自己的亲身体会以及下面的提示, 写一篇短文描述一件你最难忘的经历, 然后发表在某英文论坛上。不少于70词。 提示: 1. When and where did it happen 2. What were you doing when it happened 3. How do you feel about it _____ _____ Step 1　三定审题 1. 定人称: 第一人称为主 2. 定时态: 一般过去时和过去进行时为主 3. 定核心: 描述难忘的事情发生时正在做的事情 Step 2　谋篇布局 Step 3　润色成篇 　　Last Saturday afternoon, I took a walk in a nearby park. ①② When I came back③, a dog was walking③ after me. It followed③ me until I got to the door of my house. 　　While I was opening③ the door, it was sitting③ on the ground and looking at me, as if it was saying, “I got lost. Would you please help me ”“What a poor dog! ” I thought. Then I let it in and fed it with some food and water. ② After that, I put up a Dog-Found-Notice at the gate of our neighborhood. 　　The next day, the owner of the dog came to my house and picked it up. He thanked me a lot before leaving. ④ I was very happy to see the little dog go home with its owner, and I felt proud that I was able to give others a helping hand. ②④ ①开篇点题, 用确切的时间引入。 ②结构层次分明。话题引入→如何帮助小狗→感想。 ③一般过去时、过去进行时以及各种从句等使用正确、规范, 无语法错误, 彰显了作者深厚的英语语言功底。 ④结尾感情真挚。 实战写作———迁移创新 假如你是林海, 昨天下午5点, 你在放学回家的路上目睹了一场可怕的交通事故。请根据下列提示, 用英语写一篇80词左右的短文, 描述事故的经过。可适当发挥。 Weather Snowy What happened A red car ran fast and hit a big tree. What you did Called the police. What you learned from it . . . _____ _____ _____ 【参考范文】 It was snowing heavily at 5 o’clock yesterday afternoon. At that time, I was on the way home from school. Suddenly, a red car appeared at a street corner. It was running very fast, and the road was icy. Unluckily, it hit a big tree. The driver tried to get out of the car, but he couldn’t open the door of the car. Seeing that, I called the police for help at once. A few minutes later, some policemen came and saved the driver. I think drivers should always drive carefully and that they should be more careful on snowy days. - 2 - ... ...