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课件网) Learning Objectives At the end of the class, you will be able to 1. have a basic understanding of contiuation writing. 2. master the writing rules and writing steps of contiuation writing. Continuation Writing 后 续 写 读 读后续写的题型解读 读后续写分值25分，提供一段350词左右的语言材料，体裁一般以记叙文或夹叙夹议为主，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给两段段落开头语进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。 读后续写考察阅读理解能力和书面表达能力。 1 Presentation 1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2.评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该 档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑： （1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度； （2）内容的合理性； （3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性； （4）上下文的连贯性； 4. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的 影响程度予以考虑。 5. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。 6. 词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。 高考评分标准 三大主题： 人与自我、人与社会、人与自然 2021年新高考卷I&II 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE 以2021年新高考I&II卷真题为例 Step 1. 通读全文， 理清脉络 1.读要素 2.读情节 3.读情感 5.读主题 4.读语言 3 读后续写的写作步骤 故 事 六 要 素 where what how why when who characters time event reason place result 主要内容：_____(who)_____(what) _____(why)_____(where) _____(when). _____(how) 1. 读要素(5W1H)：抓住六要素，弄清主要内容。 A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a. m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. ] [ when who where what&why Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's ... ...
