2024年高考英语真题（新高考II卷）小作文 解读分析

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 2024年高考英语真题（新高考II卷）小作文 解读分析学案 写作 第一节 (满分15分)假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想。注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Dear Chris,I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.Yours,Li Hua新高考I卷和II卷主观卷部分的作文部分相同，为避免重复，简化了部分内容。现在从网络上找到几篇范文，以饲读者。） 【解析】应用文写作要看明白题目要求，除了题目明确给出的背景和提示，还有一些开放性内容需要考生补充。比如这封邮件，给出的一些信息包括：以李华的名义英国朋友Chris写一封邮件，分享在公园上美术课的经历。需要考生补充出的开放性内容是：出自己作品的介绍和自己的感想。开放性内容是考生应该重点考虑的：怎么介绍自己完成的作品，怎么抒发自己的情感和感想，就是我们要用大约80词要表达出的内容。写好邮件，达到顺畅和恰当的沟通交流的目的，传递信息和情感，简练表达中体现丰富和功底，是本题的考察方向。下面就几篇范文的具体情况进行简单分析，以提升广大考生的写作技能。 参考范文1：Dear Chris,I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. We were excited when informed of drawing in the park. I drew a blossom of flowers in a corner of the park, surrounded by green water, swinging in the breeze. I think I captured the beauty of them. The red paints presented them with strength, pink paints gave them warmth and the yellow paints showed their tender hearts. Being exposed to the colors of nature stimulated the artists in me. I’m still proud of my work now. I can't wait for our next art class outsides. Yours , Li Hua参考范文2：Dear Chris,I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. During that memorable art class, I completed a breathtaking painting there. My painting showed a serene park with lush green trees, colorful flowers, and a family enjoying a picnic on the grass. By highlighting the beauty of nature, I was able to capture the serenity of my peaceful surroundings. I felt proud to be able to express my emotions through art and grateful for nature’s inspiration. Perhaps we could visit the park together someday. I eagerly await the opportunity to show you my artwork when we next meet!Yours,Li Hua参考范文3：Dear Chris,I'm writing to share an extraordinary experience from last Friday when our class had an art lesson in the park. You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was!We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cher ... ...