Period Ⅴ Writing———关于实施急救的故事 一、技法指导 写关于实施急救的故事，属于叙事性文体。文章应该按照时间顺序展开，内容安排条理清晰。既然是关于实施急救的故事，写作内容应该集中在实施急救的过程描述上，以及急救的最终结果上。 二、篇章结构 一、亮点词汇 1.first aid (对伤患者的)急救 2.get injured 受伤 3.electric shock 触电；电击 4.squeeze out 榨出；挤出 5.over and over again 反复；多次 6.in place 在适当的位置； 准备妥当 7.stay calm 保持冷静 8.deal with 处理 9.make a big difference 产生巨大影响； 产生很大作用 10.perform first aid on sb 对某人进行急救 11.be careful to do sth 仔细做某事 12.in (a) panic 处在恐慌中 13.go to one’s aid 去帮助某人 14.without delay 毫不迟疑；立即 15.in desperate need of/desperately need sth 急需某物 二、高级句式 1.We should check whether he/she is conscious or not. 我们应当检查他(她)是否清醒。 2.Don’t move him or her—leave him/her where he/she is. 不要搬动他(她)，让他(她)待在原地。 3.Be careful not to move the victim violently. 要当心，不要剧烈移动患者。 4.If the victim is facing severe condition，it is vital to give him/her first aid at once. 如果患者状况严重，立刻对他(她)进行急救是至关重要的。 5.Before the ambulance came，the lady performed first aid on the kid. 救护车来之前，这位女士对这个孩子实施了急救。 6.The story is a good example in which first aid makes a big difference. 这个故事是一个很好的例子，说明急救会产生很大作用。 7.When you see someone get injured，what should you do 当你看到某人受伤的时候，你应该做什么？ 根据下列提示，用英文写一篇文章。 时间：9月6日下午 地点：镇子旁的河边 人物：你和一群伙伴 事件：你和伙伴们正在河边玩足球，突然一个叫小华的伙伴落入水里。他不会游泳。你马上跳到河里把他救起来，打完电话叫救护车之后，对他进行急救。最后小华成功获救。 第一步：要点翻译 1.突然我的一个朋友小华不慎掉入河中。 Suddenly，one of my friends，Xiao Hua，fell into the river by accident. 2.小华不会游泳，正在水里挣扎。 Xiao Hua couldn’t swim and was struggling in the water. 3.我立即跳入河中并最终把他救出。 I jumped into the river in no time and rescued him finally. 4.尽管他从水里被救出，但小华那时已昏迷不醒。 Although he was taken out of water，Xiao Hua was unconscious at that time. 5.首先，我让他躺下，压他的胸部，把水挤出来。 First，I laid him down，pressed his breast and squeezed out the water. 6.然后我对他进行人工呼吸，把空气吹进他的肺里。 Then，I performed mouth-to-mouth rescue breathing to blow air into his lungs. 7.我在学校学的急救方法帮助他重新呼吸。 The first aid I learned in the school helped him breathe again. 第二步：词句升级 1.用原因状语从句升级要点2和要点3 Since Xiao Hua couldn’t swim and was struggling in the water，I jumped into the river in no time and rescued him finally. 2.用状语从句的省略形式升级要点4 Although taken out of water，Xiao Hua was unconscious at that time. 3.用强调句型升级要点7 It was the first aid I learned in the school that helped him breathe again. 第三步：连句成篇 On September 6th，I played football with my friends at the river bank near town.Suddenly，one of my friends，Xi ... ...
