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课件网) Unit 1 Teenage life Reading for Writing A Letter of Advice Learning Objectives In this class, you are expected to 1. read a letter of advice and gather information ; 2. analyze the letter’s organization and language features (特点); 3. use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice. Now let’s read the pictures. Describe the pictures with proper words or expressions. Before writing annoyed two annoyed female/ladies/women bored a bit bored Date Greeting Body Close Signature A letter of advice Read for structure Structure What are necessary parts of a letter Date Greeting Body Close Signature A letter of advice Read for content Para 1 Para 2 I know what the problem is. I understand how you feel. Try to talk to your friend about his behaviour . Encourage your friend to try new hobbies and discuss together. The aim of writing The advice and reasons What expressions does Suan Luo use to make suggestions I recommend that... I think you should... Why not... Read for language read together! What expressions does the adviser use to show her understanding I understand quite well that... Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 I`m looking forward to your reply. Eric needs your help! What is the passage mainly about (What is Worried Friend’s problem ) Passage Center question Discover unhealthy anxious What is the passage mainly about (What are Susan Luo’s suggestions ) responsible friendly Discover Suggestions As friends 1.Talk to your friend 2.Try to have a new hobby unhealthy anxious Do students often meet with problems and need advice Why Challenge difficult new/fresh responsible friendly Discover 建议信是写信人就某件事向收信人提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人的,也可能是写给某个组织或机构的。信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由等。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、合理且有说服力。建议信的篇章结构一般是“三段式”,提出建议时通常用firstly,secondly,thirdly或to begin with/to start with,then,last but not least 等来依次陈述。 1.文体介绍 2.篇章结构 Date Greeting Body Close Signature 第一段:表明写作意图。陈述事由,告诉对方你已经知道对方的问题。需要的话可以简单介绍自己,注意礼貌用语的使用和行文的语气。 第二段:首先肯定对方的优点,然后指出需要改进的地方或针对具体情况给出具体的建议或忠告,并解释原因。注意使用礼貌用语,建议信意在提出建议,而非投诉。 第三段:对提出的建议进行总结并表达希望,希望建议能有所帮助。注意结尾也要有礼貌,使对方容易接受。 _____ Dear_____, You wrote that _____. I understand that _____. I think _____. Because _____. I am sure that _____. Best wishes, _____ ▲the problem ▲your understanding ▲your advice and the reasons ▲your confidence the date and the greeting signature Writing close Writing 9 November 2022 Dear Eric, You wrote that _____(不愿意听你讲话). I understand quite well that _____ _____ (你感到有些失望). You think that _____ _____(父母不能理解你). I recommend that _____ (多于父母沟通你的期望 expectation). When you want to tell them something,_____ (你需要 ... ...