Adversity and Courage 单元话题微写作 Name: 在续写遇险脱困主题时,情节构建可以分为以下三步: 第一步:陷入危机———紧张与不安 · 情感表现:恐慌、焦虑、绝望 · 肢体动作:全身僵硬、快速呼吸、冷汗直流 第二步:自救过程———冷静与行动 · 行动表现:冷静分析、寻找出路、勇敢行动(等待救援) · 情感变化:从恐慌到冷静,从无助到坚定 第三步:成功脱困———释然与感悟 · 情感表现:如释重负、欣喜、感激 · 主题升华:体会生命的美好、珍视家人朋友的陪伴 Appreciate and Review:(滑雪遇险) (请对应以上三步找到对应的表达) On Sunday, Nicholas, a teenager, went skiing with his father at Sugarloaf Mountain in Maine. They had a wonderful day and decided to drive home to Massachusetts after a final run. They took a chairlift to the top of the mountain, where they split up to go down in different trails. When the father finished his run, he headed to the parking lot to wait for his son. However, Nicholas never showed up. It turned out that a fierce snowstorm had swept into the area as Nicholas was on his way down. Unable to see far, he accidentally turned off (拐出) the path and ventured down the west side of the mountain. Before he knew it, Nicholas was lost and all alone. His way back to the ski trails was blocked. What’s worse, he didn’t have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies. The sun began to sink and he was getting colder by the minute. Nicholas had no idea where he was. He tried not to panic. He thought about Bear Grylls’ survival show Man vs. Wild that he used to watch on TV. In the show, Grylls is abandoned in a wild area and has to help himself out. It was time to put the tips he had learned to use. He decided to stop moving around. He needed the energy, and the winds weren’t as strong in the valley where he stood as they were up on the mountain. Plus, there was a better chance of someone finding him if he stayed put. The first thing he did was to seek shelter from the freezing wind and snow. Using his skis, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass of snow and dug(dig/dug/dug) out a hole in the middle. Then he piled branches on top of himself, like a blanket, to stay as warm as he could. When evening came, Nicholas was really hungry. He ate some snow and drank some water from a nearby stream so that he wouldn’t dehydrate (脱水). Then he returned to his cave and slept. When Nicholas didn’t show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. The father contacted the police, and a search team was gathered to look for the missing teenager. Although the weather conditions were poor and the wind was still fierce, they didn’t lose hope of finding Nicholas alive. They knew the clock was ticking, and Nicholas stood a better chance of survival the earlier they found him. The team split up. One of the searchers who knew the area better decided to sweep a mountain trail he used to hike up. The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. With all his strength, he moved towards the sound managed to wave his a ... ...
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