阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Majestic Road Hill in the suburb of our city is so steep (陡峭的) in some places that if you stopped pedaling (踩踏板), your bike would stop immediately and start to roll backwards. The uphill path is so long that it is difficult for one to make it to the top. The thirty of us came from the same class. We had a cross-country bicycle tour that day. Once we got to its top, there were two flat places: Dairy Queen for burgers and Becker’s for homemade donuts (a small cake). Usually we had little money to spare, but for this challenging event, we all had saved up a little. The deal was simple: The first one that got to the top would get his meal paid for by the rest of us. Ed and I had gone ahead of the whole team. We positioned ourselves at an advantageous point to observe the other riders who fell behind to struggle on the path. We reached the shortest, but steepest part of the hill, called “Heartbreak Ridge”. It got the name because many strong young people, who want to make it without their feet leaving their pedal to that point, only fail with a broken heart as they gather up bikes. As sixteen-year-old teenagers, Ed and I were the best at climbing hills on our bikes. I had strong legs good at climbing and Ed was so strong that he could make a football fifty yards away with a kick. The hill got the steepest for us to get to the top. Our upper body had to hang over the handle bars to keep us from falling backwards. Ed was in front of me and he eventually made it to the top. He wiped sweat from his forehead and then he looked at me, cheering. “Kev, come on!” I tried. When I was nine feet away from Ed, something happened. My legs began to cramp (抽筋). I, standing on my bike, couldn’t pedal, or move forwards. I was about to lose my balance. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just at the critical moment, Ed jumped down from the top and gave me a helping hand. _____ Ed and I cheered for them while they were struggling to ride towards the top. _____ 一、文章大意 本文讲述了作者和同学们参加越野自行车旅行,来到了陡峭难行的 Majestic Road Hill。他们约定第一个到达山顶的人由其他人请客吃饭,作者和 Ed 领先众人,但在接近山顶最陡峭的 “Heartbreak Ridge” 处,作者腿部抽筋,无法前行。关键时刻,Ed 折返帮助作者,两人最终一起到达山顶,之后他们又为后面奋力爬坡的同学们加油助威。这次经历不仅是一次体力的挑战,更增进了同学们之间的情谊。 二、故事山分析 开端:三十名同学参加越野自行车旅行,来到了以陡峭著称的 Majestic Road Hill,约定第一个到达山顶者由其他人请客吃饭,大家都为此次挑战攒了钱,作者和 Ed 领先众人。 发展:作者和 Ed 来到了最陡峭的 “Heartbreak Ridge”,Ed 成功登顶,而作者在距山顶九英尺处腿部抽筋,无法前进,面临摔倒危险。 高潮:关键时刻,Ed 跳下来帮助作者,两人一起推车上山。 结局:两人到达山顶后,为后面奋力爬坡的同学们加油,同学们陆续到达山顶,大家共同分享征服这座山的喜悦。 三、伏笔以及在续写中的回应 伏笔:The thirty of us came from the same class. We h ... ...
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