(
课件网) 读后续写专题 （亲情类） 核心素养目标 【语言能力】write the outline of 2 paragraphs by their own. 【学习能力】 learn reading and writing skills; 【文化意识】overcome writing difficulties,and enhance learning interest. 【思维品质】writing things in a logical way. By the end of this lesson, students are able to Lead in(Review) 1.What is continuation writing ？ 读 后 续 写 2.What are the elements of a story？ 时间 when 地点 where 人物 who 事件的起因 why 事件的经过 what 事件的结果 how 六要素(5W1H) How to read 文章很长？？？ 主题不藏！！！ 单词不会？？？ 找你会的！！！ 四大主题 亲情类 助人类 成长类 脱困类 Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example 1. 先看续写给出的两句话，确定大概主题方向。 Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. 2. 寻找更多认识的单词，理解故事走向 Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 am. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. Beginning: Conflict: solution : Ending Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example 经过：一开始在平稳进行，后来发生意外（矛盾出现） 起因：双胞胎想在母亲节为妈妈准备惊喜--做早饭 How to write --“十句五定” 什么是“十句五定”？ 十句：续写的两段每一段都写五句话，加起来就是十句。 五定：这十句话中，有五句是可以确定的。 每句话里可以写什么？ 动作描写，情绪描写，对话 第一段：As the twins looked around them in disappoint ... ...
