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湖南省衡阳县2024届高三第一次模拟考试英语试题读后续写--森林绝境中的坚守与希望 讲义

日期:2025-01-09 科目:英语 类型:高中教案 查看:12次 大小:21187B 来源:二一课件通
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湖南省,续写,希望,坚守,中的,绝境
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 Last year, during the summer break, my friends and I decided to go for a walk in the forest. The forest had paths, and we decided that we would hike along the paths and meet at a central point to have a drink later. The whole team had several groups and we had planned on meeting with the rest of the team after three hours. I had a lighter,a partially charged phone, and a bottle of water. We continued on our way towards the deeper part of the forest until we were far from any recognizable trail. After two hours, we were in the deepest part of the forest, and we could not trace our other friends. All of a sudden,a bear came rushing along our path, and we all run in different directions. After running for about five minutes,I stood alone in a bush. I had no clue about my surroundings as I had never been.there before.I shouted at my friends’ names loudly, but all was in vain:there was no reply, and the whole place was silent. I was confused and felt like crying as I realized I was alone with nothing to protect myself.With a lot of fear,I tried to trace the part where I had come from, but all was useless:l was lost. As I walked along the path trying to locate my friends, I realized that I was tired, and nothing was looking familiar. I was out of food, water, and barely had any battery in my phone. I decided to walk through the bushes as the trees had grown so close together. I squeezed myself between the little trees. After some thirty minutes, it started raining heavily. Though I had heavy clothing, I was rained on until I was soaked up.I started freezing and praying to the God for protection and direction out of the forest. 注意;1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. _____ While sitting down and warming myself around the fire,I heard some distant noise. _____ 文章大意:去年暑假,“我”和朋友们去森林徒步,计划三小时后在中心点会合。深入森林两小时后,大家走散,“我”还遭遇了一头熊,惊慌逃窜后迷失方向。此时“我”又累又饿,手机没电,食物和水也耗尽,接着又遭遇大雨,全身湿透,寒冷无比,只能祈祷上帝指引出路。 伏笔以及回应 伏笔 1:“我”有一个打火机,为后文点火发信号埋下伏笔。 伏笔 2:森林有路径,暗示“我”试图循径找朋友,却无果迷路。 伏笔 3:“我”大声呼喊朋友名字,没有回应,突出“我”的孤立无援。 伏笔 4:“我”手机电量不足,解释后续无法依靠手机求救。 伏笔 5:携带的水喝完,食物也没了,加剧“我”的困境。 续写要点: 情感线:从极度恐惧、绝望,到燃起希望,最后欣喜若狂。 故事线:第一段写“我”利用打火机点燃树枝发信号,等待救援。第二段写听到远处声响,发现是救援人员和朋友,最终脱险。 主旨升华句: In the face of difficulties, hope is like a beam of light that can lead us out of the darkness.(在困境面前,希望就像一束光,能引领我们走出黑暗。) When we are on the verge of giving up, perseverance gives us the strength to move forward.(当 ... ...

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