集福“第四关”：写作福-寒假作业（含解析）

集福“第四关”：写作福 参考答案 1．例文 My best friend is Li Hua. He is 13 years old and his birthday is on October 9th. Li Hua’s favorite subjects are English and maths. He is also very interested in soccer and he is a member of the school soccer club. Li Hua has a busy daily routine. He gets up at 6:20 a.m. every day. School starts at 8:00 a.m., and he has lunch at 11:30 a.m. He gets home at 4:50 p.m. He often spends his free time practicing soccer with his friends. Li Hua is a very friendly and hardworking person. He always helps me with my studies, especially in English and maths. We often study together and have a lot of fun. I am very happy to have a friend like Li Hua. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，以第三人称叙述为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍朋友李华的个人信息和兴趣爱好； 第二步，介绍李华的日常生活； 第三步，介绍李华的精神品质，表达自己对朋友的感情。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②daily routine日常生活；日常事务 ③spend time doing sth.花时间做某事 ④have a lot of fun玩得很开心 [高分句型] He is 13 years old and his birthday is on October 9th.（并列复合句） 2．例文 I love my school life My school life is very busy and colorful. Our classes begin at 8:00 a.m. I have five lessons in the morning and three in the afternoon. We have many subjects. They are Chinese, math, English, art, history and some other subjects. My favourite subject is English. It’s easy and interesting. I think it’s useful. My English teacher is very kind and funny. After school, I often play basketball with my friends, which is a great way to relax and stay healthy. I am also a member of the art club. All in all, I love my school life at Liwang Middle School. I hope to have more exciting experiences in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的学校生活，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，简介一天的课程安排、最喜欢的课程、最喜欢的老师以及原因； 第三步，谈谈自己课后的娱乐活动、所参加的俱乐部； 第四步，介绍对校园生活的评价以及美好愿景。 [亮点词汇] ①play basketball打篮球 ②a member of……的成员 ③all in all总的来说 [高分句型] After school, I often play basketball with my friends, which is a great way to relax and stay healthy. (定语从句) 3．例文 Wang Qian’s Birthday Wang Qian’s birthday is coming. On that day she wants to have a birthday party. She asks her friends to her party. Her friends want to give her some gifts. She likes reading, music and flowers. Lucy wants to give her a book. Lily wants to buy a CD for her. Lingling wants to give some flowers to her. On her birthday, her mother always buys a big birthday cake. She makes a wish and blows out the candles. They enjoy the cake and she opens all her gifts. Everyone sings the “Happy Birthday” song. She always has a very happy birthday. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注 ... ...