Continuation Writing 读后续写 A Mother’s Day Surprise The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment , their father appeared. Para2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 续写第一步：Read for the theme and five elements （主题和6要素） Theme When Where Who What Why How 续写第二步：Read for the plot and the emotion（情节和情感） 续写第三步：Character Analyst (人物性格分析) Mom_____ Thomas_____ Maggie_____ 续写第四步：研究所给句子，推测新信息，合理提出续写情节推断续写框架。 TIP 1: 两段首句定一框 研究所给的开头句子，一般续写第一段的开头承上启下，具体写什么大多由第二段的开头决定 Para 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment , their father appeared. Questions 1: 2: 3: ... TIP2：两框两首正能量：第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。 Para2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Questions 1: 2: 3: TIP3：提出问题链，借用回答构成情节 TIP4：寻找原文的续写点 TIP5：巧用动作为主线，借助心理描写，让续写内容生动形象化 细节积累： 1) 她的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。 A bright smile crossed her face 2) 因为高兴双眼闪闪发亮。 Her eyes twinkled sparkled with pleasure. 3)看到早餐盘她眼睛都惊讶得睁大了。 Her eyes widened with surprise at the sight of the breakfast tray. 4）她把它们紧紧地抱在胸前，终于抬起头， 泪流满面地微笑着。 She hugged them to her ches ... ...
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