阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Two Coins for the Carousel I hold the two shiny coins in my pocket— just enough for two carousel (旋转木马) rides. The air is filled with the sounds of the carousel: the cheerful music, the rhythmic spinning (旋转) , and the laughter of children. They’re all reaching for rings from the dispenser (自动售货机) as they spin past, each hoping to catch the gold ring. That’s the one I’m after too. Every ride, a single gold ring appears, and whoever grabs it wins a ticket for a free, giant ice-cream. Silver rings just mean another ride, but I’m set on the gold. Spotting my friend Alice across the crowd, I pull Mom by the sleeve. “Look, Mama,” I say, pointing. “Can I go and say hello ” Mama nods, saying “Go ahead, Grace.” I take off through the crowd. Alice is watching the carousel, her eyes fixed on the spinning horses. “Are you going to ride ” I ask. She shakes her head. “Papa doesn’t bring any coins today.” Feeling the weight of my two coins, I know Mama won’t mind if I share. “Do you want to ride with me ” I offer, holding up the coins. Her smile is all the answer I need. “I’m going to share my coins with Alice,” I whisper to Mama as we make our way toward the carousel. Mama’s smile tells me I made the right choice. I hand my coin to the worker and Alice gives him my other coin. “Which one do you want to ride ” asks Alice. I think she wants me to pick first since I’m the one who paid. A blue horse with a chipped nose catches my eye. “This one,” I say proudly, climbing on and grasping the pole tightly. Alice looks around me quickly and picks the one right behind me. As we spin, the music slows, signaling the end of the ride. I have one more chance for the gold ring. And there it is, sliding down the dispenser. I stretch out my hand, but it slips through my fingers. Maybe next time. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Behind me, Alice starts shouting with excitement. _____ “Grace! Let’s share it!” she shouts, holding up the ice-cream. _____ 文章大意 “我” 口袋里有两枚硬币,刚好够玩两次旋转木马,旋转木马上有自动售货机分发彩环,抓到金环能赢得一个免费的巨型冰淇淋,银环则意味着可以再玩一次,“我” 一心想要抓到金环。在人群中看到朋友爱丽丝后,得知她爸爸没带硬币不能玩,“我” 决定和她分享硬币。我们一起去玩旋转木马,“我” 选了一匹蓝色鼻子有缺口的马,爱丽丝选了我后面的那匹。第一次旋转结束,音乐变慢,“我” 没能抓到金环,还有一次机会抓金环。 故事山分析 开端:“我” 带着两枚硬币准备玩旋转木马抓金环,遇到没带硬币的爱丽丝,决定和她分享。 发展:我们一起玩旋转木马,各自选好马匹,第一次旋转结束 “我” 没抓到金环。 高潮:第二次旋转时,金环出现,谁能抓到金环成为故事高潮,爱丽丝的反应和 “我” 的心情将是重点。 结局(待续写):抓到金环后的后续情节,是爱丽丝抓到还是 “我” 抓到,以及如何分享喜悦,让故事有一个温馨的结尾。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 “我” 一心想要抓到金环赢得免费冰淇淋:续写中会围绕金环的归属展开,抓到金环后如何处理,是自 ... ...
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