阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The side door of the small aircraft was opened wide, and the wind rushed through the cargo hold(货仓). Packed tightly were fourteen silent people. Two of them were my adult children. Holding themselves perfectly still, they stared out at the endless sky. When we reached a height of 4,300 feet, my son’s face turned pale as he carefully inched next to the opening, leaned(倾斜)sideways, and fell out of the airplane. Something went cold in my heart when I realized he was gone. But, only seconds later, instructions were being barked, and my daughter suddenly appeared in the same space just occupied by my son. She seemed a little nervous and then fell away into the wild blue sky after her brother. For a quick moment, a desperate fear overcame me, and I wondered if that was the last time I would see them and whether they would land safely. But the thought soon passed as I felt a strong pull on my pack and was moved into position by our instructor. With a big birthday approaching, two of my adult children had chosen to surprise me with an unforgettable way. I’d wanted to chicken out once we reached the airport, but when I heard a woman celebrating her fiftieth wedding anniversary decided to skydive, I thought that I had the courage to do it, too. The wind blew louder as we went up further, each second feeling like an eternity(永生). My heart pounded in my chest quickly. Below me, the world seemed so distant, a patchwork of green fields and shining water. As I watched my children disappear into the vastness, a part of me wanted to scream, to pull them back into the safety of the aircraft. But another part, a deeper part, understood the excitement they sought and the freedom they had although they were afraid before skydiving. 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The instructor’s voice showed it was my turn. _____ _____ My son and daughter rushed to me when I landed. _____ _____ 文章大意 文章讲述了作者与成年子女一起参与跳伞的经历。飞机舱门打开,狂风灌进货仓,十四人安静地准备着。到达 4300 英尺高空时,儿子脸色苍白,小心地挪到舱口侧身跃出,随后女儿也紧张地跟着跳了下去。作者心生恐惧,担心子女安危,但很快这种想法被抛却。原来,在作者生日将至时,子女们用跳伞给作者惊喜,作者本想临阵脱逃,却因一位庆祝金婚的女士也选择跳伞而鼓起勇气。飞机不断上升,风声呼啸,作者看着子女消失在广阔天空,内心既想呼喊他们回来,又理解他们对刺激和自由的追求。 故事山分析 开端:作者和子女在飞机上准备跳伞,气氛紧张。 发展:儿子和女儿先后跳出飞机,作者心生恐惧与担忧。 高潮:轮到作者跳伞,这是故事的高潮,充满紧张与刺激。 结局(待续写):作者完成跳伞,与子女团聚,分享感受,获得感悟,这将是故事的结局。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 1.儿子脸色苍白,小心地挪到舱口侧身跃出:在续写中可体现儿子虽然害怕但勇敢完成跳伞,和作者团聚时分享紧张心情,回应其跳伞时的状态。 2.女儿似乎有点紧张,然后跟着跳下去:续写时可描述女儿着陆后的表现,如兴奋与紧张交织,与作者交流跳伞感受,回应她跳伞前的紧张情绪。 ... ...
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