故事续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A Sweet Song “Nothing will ever be the same again,” Ally whispered. She sank slowly into her father’s favorite chair and stared at the small American flag on his desk. It was the flag which Chief Russell had given to her after the funeral last summer, when he hugged her and told her how proud the Police Department was of her dad’s work for them. His tears had warmed Ally’s cheeks; her own tears were still frozen inside her heart. Ally looked at her father’s picture on the bookcase. Dad was sitting in the middle of a stream, wet through but grinning proudly. “I miss you, Dad,” she said softly. By this time last year she had already taken dozens of pictures. Ever since she could remember, she and Dad had been a team, searching the woods behind the house each weekend for a glimpse of the special wood warbler (林中莺). Ally reached for the first photo album she and Dad had put together. On the cover a tiny orange bird with blue-gray wings and sharp black eyes peered out of the photo her father had clipped from a local newspaper. Ally smiled, remembering the excited look on his face when he first showed her the pretty bird. “Ally, I bet if we search real hard, we’ll see this little guy together some day.” They’d never spotted the warbler, but her father had an amazing way of making each outing seem special. Staying with Dad, Ally felt comfortable. “If only I could get that good feeling back,” she thought, sighing. Staring at the bird, suddenly, she knew exactly what she had to do. Grabbing the-little flag, she placed her camera around her neck and hurried outside. Ally stuck the flag among the flowers in the garden. “Please let me see the warbler,” she murmured to herself. She gave her worried Mom a kiss and then set off into the woods. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her. _____ _____ Determined to start out the next morning, she was about to head home when a ringing birdsong floated down to her. _____ _____ A Sweet Song故事续写 续写要点 第一段：着重描写 Ally 在树林中的感受，可回忆与父亲相处的过往，如在溪边的嬉戏、在树林里的探索等，突出她对父亲的思念以及此刻独自寻找的复杂心情。同时描述树林里的景色，如树叶的沙沙声、阳光透过树叶的光斑等，营造氛围。 第二段：当听到鸟鸣后，Ally 的反应应是惊喜与紧张交织。详细描写她看到林中莺时的样子，如鸟儿的姿态、羽毛的色泽等。最后以 Ally 的感悟收尾，升华主题，表达她对父亲的情感以及从这次经历中获得的力量。 情感线 Ally 从最初对父亲离世的深深悲痛，内心的泪水 “冻结”，到踏入树林后对过往与父亲相处美好时光的怀念，孤独感与思念交织。在听到鸟鸣发现林中莺的那一刻，惊喜与激动涌上心头，最终她收获了温暖与力量，内心的悲伤得到了些许慰藉，情感从低沉压抑逐渐转向积极温暖。 故事线 Ally 带着小旗和相机进入树林，熟悉的泥土气息扑面而来，回忆如潮水般涌来，她想起与父亲在树林里的点点滴滴。 Ally 沿着曾经和父亲走过的路前行，来到溪边，坐在熟悉的石头上，感受着微风，仿佛听到父亲的笑声 ... ...
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