Unit 5 Here and Now 单元话题（此时此刻）写作满分范文15篇（含解析）2024-2025学年七年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（人教版2024）

学校:_____姓名：_____班级：_____考号：_____ Unit 5 Here and Now 单元话题（此时此刻）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．假如今天是星期天，天气晴朗而温暖。你的家庭成员正在进行不同的活动。请你根据下面的信息和提示，用英语写一篇短文。 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，可适当发挥。 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）。 词数：至少70个词。 人物 正在做的事 爷爷、奶奶 外出散步 爸爸 看一本历史书 妈妈 在客厅里看电视 弟弟、妹妹 在卧室里下象棋 我 …… _____ 【答案】例文 Today is Sunday. The weather is warm and sunny. It’s a nice day for my family to do fun things at home. My grandparents are walking outside. They are breathing fresh air and talking happily. My dad is in his armchair. He is reading a history book. My mom is in the living room. She is watching TV and laughing sometimes. My little brother and sister are in the bedroom. They are playing chess. They are trying to win the game. What am I doing I am in the study, listening to music while doing my homework. The music helps me do my homework better. It’s a great Sunday afternoon. We all have a good time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“现在进行时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，需包含所有内容，可适当增添细节以保证内容连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍天气情况，引出主题。 第二步，具体介绍人物及其对应活动。 [亮点词汇] ①breath fresh air呼吸新鲜空气 ②watch TV看电视 ③play chess下象棋 ④have a good time 过得愉快 [高分句型] ①They are breathing fresh air and talking happily.（and连接并列成分） ②I am in the study, listening to music while doing my homework.（while引导时间状语从句） 2．今天是星期天，下着雪，天气很冷，但很多孩子在户外玩耍。请根据提示，写一篇短文，描述孩子们的活动。 提示： 1. How’s the weather today 2. What are the children doing 3. How do they feel 写作要求： (1) 短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； (2) 词数：70词左右； (3) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 _____ 【答案】例文 It’s Sunday today. It’s snowing and it’s very cold. The children are wearing their warm clothes. Look at the children! They’re playing outside. Some are skating, some are running in the snow, some are having a snowball fight, and others are making a snowman. Although the weather is cold, they are still having great fun. They all feel very happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“现在进行时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍今日的天气； 第二步，具体介绍孩子们在户外做什么； 第三步，总结孩子们在外玩耍的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①look at看一看 ②have snow fight打雪仗 ③have great fun玩得开心 [高分句型] ①It’s snowing and it’s very cold. (并列句) ②Although the weather is cold, they are still having great fun. (although引导的让步状语从句) 3．假如你是李华，请你根据下面的提示，给你的好朋友Sarah写一封信，告诉她此时你们一家人在公园里的活动情况。 写作要点： 1. What time is ... ...