专题09 材料作文（原卷版+解析版）---2025年上海16区中考英语二模试题分项汇编

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 专题09 材料作文（解析版） 宝山区 64．Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.（请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。） 近年来、全球掀起了汉语学习的热潮，越来越多的人渴望了解中国文化和掌握汉语。英国留学生John是一名汉语爱好者，他在《跨文化对话》杂志上发布了招募启事，寻求一名汉语学习小顾问（adviser）、帮助他解决汉语学习中的困惑：如记忆汉字（Chinese characters）、理解成语（Chinese idioms）及辨别文化差异（cultural differences）等。 假如你是初三学生李华，请你给 John写一封应征信，阐述你能胜任汉语学习小顾问的理由，并针对 John汉语学习中的1~2个困惑提供合理的学习建议。 （注意：1. 信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。） _____ 【答案】例文 Dear John, I’m Li Hua, a ninth-grade student passionate about sharing Chinese culture. Having mastered effective methods to learn Chinese, I believe I can assist you. Firstly, memorizing characters becomes easier by breaking them into components. For example, “休” (rest) combines “人” (person) and “木” (tree), symbolizing someone resting under a tree. Secondly, understanding idioms requires knowing their origins. “画蛇添足” (draw legs on a snake) warns against unnecessary actions, originating from an ancient story. Practicing through daily sentences and cultural contexts will deepen your comprehension. I’d love to help you explore more. Feel free to contact me! Sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、自我介绍，表达应征意愿； 第二步、给出胜任理由，针对John的困惑给出建议； 第三步、书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①passionate about…对……充满热情 ②warn against告诫 ③feel free to do sth.随意做某事 [高分句型] ①Having mastered effective methods to learn Chinese, I believe I can assist you.(宾语从句) 崇明区 64．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 社区计划下个周末开展一次“社区健康跑(Community Health Run)”活动，招募学生志愿者参与策划与组织，以此倡导健康生活方式。假设你是初三学生陆遥，请写一封自荐信给社区负责人张先生，自荐信必须包含以下两点： 1.介绍你具备的组织能力(如活动策划经验、沟通能力等)； 2.谈谈你对这次活动流程的设想。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) _____ 【答案】例文： Dear Mr. Zhang, I’m Lu Yao, a junior 3 student. I hope to get an opportunity to be a volunteer for Community Health Run. I am a healthy and active boy who likes organizing group activities. In our class, I am in charge of organizing the morning reading every day. And the whole class speaks highly of my job. What’s more, I ever planned a singing contest for our class which turned out to be a great success. If I got this chance, I’d like to make some preparations. First, I’ll communicate with all the runners to get more detailed information about their needs. T ... ...