(
课件网) Dear Fred, Welcome to join our outing this weekend and I’d like to tell you some details about it. Our destination is the Mount Hua, which you have been looking forward to climbing since you came to our school. We’ll set out from our school gate at 8:00 this Saturday morning and ride bikes there. On arrival, we’ll climb the mountain, which may take us about five hours. After that, we’ll have a picnic on the top of it. Do remember to take some water and food with you. Besides, you’d better wear sport shoes to avoid injury. I’m looking forward to your joining. Yours, Li Hua 内容组织 语言(词汇语法) 衔接 要点齐全，结构合理 多样性、恰当性、准确性 上下文衔接和全文连贯性 B2U5 Music Reading for Writing by Miss Fang 2021.4.7 disease ache treatment from (then) on lean get through moreover satisfaction being n. (疾)病 vi.&n. 疼痛 n. 治疗；对待；处理 从(那)时起 vt. (leant/leaned, leant/leaned)依靠；倾斜 （设法）处理；完成 adv. 而且；此外 n. 满足；满意；欣慰 n. 身心；存在；生物 various somehow rhetorical metaphor personification repetition simile outline reaction adj. 各种不同的；各种各样的 adv. 以某种方式（或方法）；不知怎么地 adj. 修辞的 n. 暗喻；隐喻 n. 拟人；人格化；化身 n. 重复；重做 n. 明喻 n.&vt. 概述；概要 n. 反应；回应 假如你是高中生李华，你校将举办一次以 How Music can Change a Person’s Life为主题的演讲比赛，请你按照主题，写下你的演讲稿。 Learn how to write a speech 演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。它可以用来交流思想、感情，表达主张、见解，也可以用来介绍自己的学习、工作情况和经验。 演讲稿具有宣传、鼓动、教育等作用，它可以把演讲者的观点、主张与思想感情传达给听众，使他们信服并在思想感情上产生共鸣。 演讲稿 称呼：最常用的是Ladies and gentlemen，也可根据不同情况，选用其他称呼。 开头：常用的开头有点明主题、交代背景、提出问题等。 正文：它是整篇演讲的主体，必须有重点、有层次。由于演讲材料是通过口头表达的，为了便于听众理解，各段落应上下连贯，段与段之间有适当的过渡和呼应。 结尾：结尾的方法有归纳法、引文法、反问法等。归纳法是概括一篇演讲的中心思想，总结强调主要观点；引文法则是引用名言警句，升华主题，留下思考；反问法是以问句引发听众思考和对演讲者观点的认同。此外，演讲稿的结尾也可以用感谢、展望、鼓舞等语句作结，使演讲能自然收束，给人留下深刻印象。 演讲稿 假如你是高中生李华，你校将举办一次以 How Music can Change a Person’s Life为主题的演讲比赛，请你按照主题，写下你的演讲稿。 Learn how to write a speech Sarah William Music is the language of the mind. 音乐是心灵的语言。 b. Music is the medicine of the mind. 音乐是心灵的良药。 Lexical chunks (collocation) Paragraph the context Para. 1 Para. 2 & 3 Para. 4 greeting and self-introduction topic of the speech the experience with music the feelings that music gives you conclusion of the speech Read and Think———Structure [A] Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all [B] “Music is the medicine of the mind.” [C] Music gave me... [D] ...it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind. [E] ... ...
