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课件网) Parents'Rules My Opinion Writing Guide of Grade 9 Unit 2 What is a family For warmness,for happiness. But now, about the rules, I have something to say. Writing task Write a diary entry （日记）explaining which rule ( s ) you do not agree with at home and how you think the rule (s) should be changed. 审题： Style （体裁）: a diary entry Tense （时态）& simple present tense , simple future tense , Grammar : passive voice with modal verbs Person （人称）: the first person (I), the third person ( they ) Key points （要点）: 1. rule ( s ) you don ’ t agree with at home 2. how to change the rule ( s ) 写作结构 1.家里有很多家规 2.列举家规： I am not allowed to...;I must... ; I have to...; I can't ;I should(not)... 3.同意大多数家规；或某些家规并列举；然后说出不同意的家规 I agree...,but I don't agree/think that.../I think I should be allowed to... 4.就你的不同意给出理由... 5.最后做出承诺：例如你将会做什么遵守新的规则 1.在上学日的晚上，我不被允许和朋友出去闲逛。 on school nights hang out with 2.我不被允许选择我自己的衣服 3.在家里顶嘴也是不允许的 4.我不被允许玩手机 5.完成作业之前，我不能练习我的爱好 6.放学之后，我必须要立刻回家 3.同意大多数家规；或某些家规并列举；然后说出不同意的家规 I agree...,but I don't agree/think that.../I think I should be allowed to... 2.列家规 4.就你的不同意给出理由... 完成作业之前，我不能练习我的爱好 放学之后，我能... 在上学日的晚上，我不被允许和朋友出去闲逛。 First of all（首先）, Secondly, Besides （除此之外）, What ’ s more （另外）, In addition（另外）, Most importantly（最重要的是）, Last but not least（最后但同样重要的是）. Some Transitional Words 过渡词 5.最后做出承诺：例如你将会做什么遵守新的规则 我能练习我的爱好完成作业之前 放学之后，我不必要立刻回家 It would be better if I could… I would like to ..… I could ... if I .… I promise that I will.... 在上学日的晚上，我被允许和朋友出去闲逛。 Dear Diary, September 26th First step Write down the rule ( s ) and your disagreement. I am not allowed to play with my cell phone. I can't practice my hobby before finishing all the homework. I have to go home at once after school. I do not agree with the rule that .… I do not agree that .… I do not think that ..… I don＇t think that I have to go home at once after school. Firstly, I am old enough to manage my time. I am very tired after a busy day of schoolwork. Doing sports can help students focus on their schoolwork better and study more efficiently（有效率地). If I can do sports for a while after school, I believe I will finish my homework more quickly at night. Besides, I can make more friends if I spend more time with my classmates. And most importantly, it ’ s beneficial(有益的) for my health. Second step Think about the reasons to support your disagreement. It would be better if I could play basketball with my friends for half an hour before going back home. I promise that it won’t get in the way of my study and I will get home on time every day. Third step ... ...
