(课件网) Period 6 UNIT 2 MORALS AND VIRTUES 主题语境 人与自我———优秀品行 本单元的写作任务是描述一个寓言故事,并对该故事进行评论。写作应主要根据寓言故事的基本信息,分析里面的人物角色、故事发生的背景、故事的情节等,最后是正反两方面的评论。 寓言故事评论 课时学案 写作(Writing) (一)基本框架 开头:寓言故事的基本信息,如题目、故事概要等; 主体:针对寓言故事的分析,如作者的写作目的、寓意等; 结尾:对该寓言故事的观点或看法,也可提出希望或发出号召。 (二)常用表达 1.引述材料常用句型 ①After reading the fable,I understand that we teenagers should find and make good use of our advantages,stopping complaining about the shortcomings all the time. 读了这个寓言故事之后,我明白了我们青少年应该发现和充分利用我们的优势,不要总是抱怨自己的缺点。 ②I was deeply impressed with the fable which is about protecting the earth. 这则关于保护地球的寓言给我留下了深刻的印象。 2.分析材料常用句型 ①The fable tells us that one good turn deserves another. 这个寓言故事告诉我们,善有善报。 ②As a matter of fact,the fable mirrors that different attitudes may bring about different results. 事实上,这个寓言故事反映了不同的态度可能会带来不同的结果。 ③So we should stay positive and value what we have instead of complaining too much. 所以我们应该保持积极的态度,珍惜我们所拥有的,而不是抱怨太多。 ④This fable indicates that those not blindly listening to other's criticism or praise are more likely to obtain what they are pursuing. 这个寓言故事表明,那些不盲目听别人批评或赞扬的人更有可能获得他们所追求的东西。 ⑤So whatever you encounter,accept it willingly and use it to the fullest. 所以无论你遇到什么,欣然接受并充分利用它。 3.总结全文常用句型 ①Whenever I have the ability to help others,I should lend a hand. 每当我有能力帮助别人的时候,我应该伸出援助之手。 ②As an old saying goes,“Union means power.” 俗话说:“团结就是力量。” ③I strongly hope you can have a try at it and the fable will never disappoint you! 我强烈希望你试着看看这个寓言故事,它绝不会让你失望。 请阅读下面这个寓言故事,并写一篇评论。 An old woman had a cat.The cat was very old,she could not run quickly,and she could not bite,because she was too old.One day the old cat saw a mouse,she jumped and caught the mouse.But she could not bite it,so the mouse got out of her mouth and ran away.Then the old woman became very angry because the cat had not killed the mouse.She began to hit the cat.The cat said,“Do not hit your old servant.I have worked for you for many years,and I would work for you still,but I am too old.Do not be unkind to the old,but remember what good work the old did when they were young.” [审题构思] 1.确定体裁:本文为寓言故事评论,属于议论文; 2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第三人称; 3.确定时态:本文的主体时态为一般现在时; 4.确定内容: ①描述寓言故事的基本信息; ②分析寓言故事; ③自己的观点或看法,提出倡议。 [遣词造句] 1.老太太打了猫。 The old woman _____. 2.她太老了,抓不到老鼠。 She is _____ a mouse. 3. ... ...