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课件网) Unit 8 We’re trying to save the earth! Writing 课堂导 入 Before-writing What’s the video about It is about pollutions Our earth is . badly polluted Our earth is in great . danger We have only one earth! 课堂导 入 Before-writing Before-writing 课堂导 入 What are the pollutions air pollution waste pollution water pollution noise pollution Before-writing 课堂导 入 What is the pollution？Describe the cause and solution air pollution Causes: Factories that burn coal the air with a lot of _____ and there are so many_____ on the road these days. Solutions: Take _____transportation instead of driving cars. The government should develop_____to deal with the factories. black smoke cars laws pollute public When we talk about pollutions,we can talk about the problems,the couses,the and solutions. What are the pollutions？ What caused the pollutions？ 课堂导 入 Before-writing Problems Causes Solutions How to deal with the problems Before-writing 课堂导 入 6月5日是世界环境日，我校英语社团正在组织主题为 Let’s protect our river 的征文活动。作为一名初中生，请你写一篇倡议书,倡议广大师生参与保护河流的行动 写作要求： 1. 谈谈河流目前的问题以及造成这个问题的原因。 2. 我们可以做什么来保护河流。 3. 号召大家参与环保活动，让我们的城市更干净。 4. 不少于80词。 审题 审体裁： 审人称： 审时态： 审要点： 审背景： 说明文（exposition） 第一人称（first person） 一般现在时（present tense） 1. 问题以及原因。 2. 我们可以做什么来保护河流。 3. 号召大家参与环保活动，让我们的城市更干净。 反映环境问题，倡导环境保护。 Before-writing 审体裁： 审人称： 审时态： 说明文（exposition） 第一人称（first person） 一般现在时（present tense） 1.问题以及原因。 2.我们可以做什么来保护河流。 3.号召大家参与环保活动，让我们的城市更干净。 Before-writing 课堂导 入 Let’s protect our river Beginning Body Ending problems causes solutions call on individuals (个人) government society Mindmap Possible structures of your passage 1.should /need /had better do… 2.It’s necessary for us to do… 3.We mustn't/ shouldn't... 4.We aren't supposed to do … 5.It is everyone's duty to … 6.The government should… 1. Here are some reasons 2. Firstly... 3. What’s more... Body Before-writing 写作探究 写作评价量表 Standard评价标准 Standard Scores标准分值 Score 得分 是否准确描述问题并给出针对性建议 8 是否使用了丰富的表示建议的句式 4 是否恰当运用了结束语 2 是否运用了关联词 2 书写 3 语法错误、拼写失误 总分 25 While-writing 写作探究 完成写作后与同伴进行互批。 While-writing 写作探究 Work in groups and finish the writing. Post-writing 写作探究 Share your writing Post-writing 写作探究 I’d like to talk about the river in our city. The river is not as beautiful as before. Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. The river is dirtier now. People are throwing litter into the river . This is turning a beautiful place into an ugly one. Factories are putting waste into the river and they burn coal, which also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. I ... ...
