(
课件网) Unit 2 School life Integration D Pre-writing Millie wrote a suggestion letter to the head teacher of Sunshine Middle School. Reading 1. Why does Millie write the letter 2. How many suggestions does Millie make in the letter She wants to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of her school life. Three. Read Millie’s letter in Part D2 and answer the questions. 3. What does Millie suggest first Why Reading She suggests that her school should provide more ping-pong tables, so more students can play ping-pong during breaks. 4. What does Millie think of the library She thinks the library is a great place for students to enjoy reading and open their minds. Reading 5. Why does Millie think they need more computers Because with more computers, it is easier for students to search online. Reading Structure Main body: Politely make your suggestions and give reasons. Introduction: Say why you are writing. Conclusion: Add a sentence to conclude the letter. Salutation (称呼) Closing (结束语) Signature (署名) Expressions I think it will be a good idea to ... I have a suggestion for … I hope you will find my suggestions useful/helpful/… Pre-writing Choose three parts that you think should be improved and write down your suggestions. D1 Write your suggestion letter based on the information in Part D1. Use Millie’s letter as a model. Useful expressions I am writing (this letter) to make/offer some suggestions on … First, I would like to suggest ..., so ... Second/Moreover/Finally, I think we should ..., because ... I think it will be a good idea to ... so that ... I have a suggestion for ... I hope my suggestions help ... I hope you find my suggestions useful/helpful/... D3 Self-assessment 问题 是 否 如果为“否”，如何改进？ 你的建议书是否采用了正确的格式？ 你在建议书的首段是否阐明了写信的目的？ 你在建议书的主干部分是否条理清晰地提出你的建议并说明理由？ 你在建议书的尾段是否表达了自己的希望？ 你的建议书是否使用了恰当的句型和丰富的词语来提出自己的建议和阐述理由？ 你在建议书中的措辞是否正式，语气是否礼貌？ 你的建议书在拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确？ Useful phrases make some suggestions on ... provide more ping-pong tables during breaks a great place for us to enjoy reading open our minds It is easier for us to search online. find my suggestions useful 就……提出一些建议 多提供一些乒乓球桌 课间休息时 一个让我们享受阅读的好地方 开拓我们的思维 这让我们上网搜索更容易 发现我的建议很有用 Homework Revise your suggestion letter after class. Thank you!
