(
课件网) Topic：Self-improvement 人教版英语 中考总复习 写作专项训练 教学文本 教学目标 通过学习本课，学生能够： 1. 通过阅读两个文本，获取关键信息，构建清晰的写作框架，完成自我提升 计划的写作； 2. 分析“建议”与“计划”的语言特征差异，并能将准确的时态、人称和句型运 用到写作中； 3. 能够结合写作技巧和评价量表自评及互评； 4. 在语言实践中描述个人成长目标，形成持续进取、突破自我的积极态度。 To Be a Better Self -Self-improvement- Warm-up ★I think _____ is _____. Warm-up helpful kind hard-working brave friendly active ... Shining Points honest Warm-up Noticing others’shining points is also a huge shining point！Everyone can be a shining example！ ★ a shining example Reading Su Yiming 苏翊鸣 Fast-reading What is Su Yiming like A. He is creative. B. He is hard-working. C. He is lucky. D. He is shy. Why He is hard-working because _____ he practised 4 to 6 hours daily. he woke up early to train without giving up. he kept practising difficult moves. He is still working hard in order to_____. Fast-reading Why is he still working hard be hard-working won gold medals get higher goals achieve higher goals Even if we’re good, we can always find ways to improve. How can we be better Our school website is collecting plans for self-improvement blogs! The best plans will get ‘Shining Star Prize’. Please write your plans about how to be a better self at school, at home and in society and send them to the website. Reading Task 1.1 How many parts are there in the passage How can we divide them？ Part 1（Para. _____） Part 2 （Para. _____） Part 3 （Para. _____） Three. ① ②③④ ⑤ Reading Task 1.2 Match the main idea with each part. Part 1（Para. ①） Conclusion Part 2 （Para.②③④） Introduction Part 3 （Para.⑤） Suggestions Tip 1： Use clear structure and linking words. Reading Task 2.1 What are the writer’s suggestions How does he support them？ Suggestions(_____) Supporting Details(支撑细节) Para.② It’s a good idea to be hard-working. For example, ... Because ... Example Reason Topic Sentences 主题句 Reading Task 2.2 Discuss in groups and find the answers. Suggestions(_____) Supporting Details(支撑细节) Para.③ such as... Para.④ You can show more love to family members. You can do something good. In order to ... Purpose(目的) Example ... are wonderful examples. “Rome wasn’t built in a day.” Example Quotation (引用) Topic Sentences Reading Suggestions(_____) Supporting details(支撑细节) Para.② It’s a good idea to be hard-working. For example, ... Because ... Para.③ Para.④ You can show more love to family members. You can do something good. such as... In order to ... ... are wonderful examples. “Rome wasn’t built in a day.” Tip 2： Use topic sentences(主题句) to show opinions. Tip 3： Use different supporting details. Topic Sentences Pre-writing Discuss and share Can you give more suggestions？ Choose one aspect(方面) and share： At school / At home / In society， topic sentence + supporting ... ...
