
读后续写:人与动物类 Part1:经典例文 (小狗救人) 1 Part2:人与动物故事构造套路 3 套路一:可爱型动物故事情节 3 套路二:凶猛型动物故事情节 6 套路三、主题升华句 8 Part3:人与动物场景素材积累 8 Part4:灵活应用 11 例1:人与麻雀 11 Part5:高考真题再现 13 真题1::小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】 13 真题2:拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】 16 从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一般从两个角度展开,一个就是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题,要么是动物帮助人类解决问题;另外一个就是,人类与动物产生冲突,尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物,遇到危险,首先沉着冷静与动物周旋,后来向别人求助,之后成功脱险的故事。例如:人狼大战:骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶,脱险经历(2017年6月浙江高考);人战:北极探险者给北极熊拍照,遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历(2020年6 月浙江高考);人狗和谐:父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴,帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事(2020年1月浙江高考);人猫和谐:作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助,赶走土拨鼠的故事(2021年3月临沂市一模)。 Part1:经典例文 (小狗救人) Just as many families do at a point, Catherine chose to add a new family member by adopting a pet. Shortly after her daughter Kate’s birth, Catherine decided she wanted a close bond with a dog for Kate. Thus, Catherine called the dog shelter close by to inquire about adoption. After hearing about the available animals, she chose a Doberman Pinscher. Once they signed adoption papers, they named the dog Khan. Catherine was hopeful this would provide valuable lessons for her baby, such as sharing, learning to love and responsibility to care for animals. She was looking forward to having the dog join the family. Hearing of Khan’s rough background, Catherine immediately loved the dog. She was overjoyed to bring this special dog back to her family. Of course, she realized there were risks involved. Well, the obvious risks from bringing a large, potentially dangerous animal to her young baby, Catherine pushed them aside. If she had not adopted Khan, he would have been killed just a week later. So, this was his new life and second chance, and the family was hoping for the best. Everything began smoothly. They trained Khan during the first few days. However, everything changed on that fourth day when the dog acted completely out of character. The fateful day began with the usual playtime in the yard. Although baby Kate had her parents watching from a distance, they did not notice anything out of the ordinary. Kate and the new dog had been making a habit of playing out back like this. However, things were different this day. So what was actually happening out there The two were not being loud or crazy. They began running through the backyard grass together. Again, Catherine watched the two closely. Surprisingly, things had changed within an instant! 注意: 1.续写词数应为150词左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden, _____ Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then fell down with dying eyes. _____ 【 ... ...
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