新外研版八上英语U2作文指导 第1阶 高分词句储备 一、话题词汇 1. 自从……以来 _____ 2. 害怕的；恐惧的 _____ 3. 争论；争吵 _____ 4. 关系 _____ 5. 交朋友 _____ 6. 相处得好 _____ 二、佳句仿写 7. 【教材原句】They have been together for three years. (for+时间段) →我们住在这个小房子里五年了。 8. 【教材原句】Sharing has made me feel happy for the past four years. (make sb do sth) →这件事情使我感到很伤心。 9. 【教材原句】How do people get along with each other (get along with sb) →我们怎样才能与父母和睦相处呢？ 第2阶 经典范文模版 As a Chinese saying goes: A friend in need is a friend indeed (用谚语引出主题). So I think true friends should help each other when they are in trouble (介绍对某种感情的看法). I have a close friend. His name is John. (介绍故事主角) I think we are similar to each other. I enjoy the time I spend with him. Last year, I didn't pass my maths exam. I felt disappointed and couldn't help crying. He came to comfort me. From then on, he helped me with my maths. With his help, I am not weak in maths any longer. (描述个人经历) It is necessary for us to learn how to get on well with friends. First of all, we need to keep in touch with each other. What's more, we had better share not only happiness but also sadness. Finally, we need to understand each other. (维持感情的建议) Only in this way can our friendship last longer. 第3阶 高分范文赏析 初中生活是人生中一段美好的旅程，它会给每个人都留下难忘的回忆。近期，你们学校英语广播站正在开展以"初中生活关键词"为主题的征稿活动。请你根据下图提示的5个关键词，选出其中一个符合自己的并写一篇英语短文投稿(也可以自拟一个关键词)，谈谈你选择该词的理由及其背后的故事。 Friendship ↑ Growth ← Keywords of middle school life → Hope ↓ Challenge Discovery 写作要求： 1. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实人名或校名； 3. 不少于90词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 The keyword of my middle school life How time flies! The middle school life is coming to an end soon. When I recall the three years, one word comes to my mind. It is "_____". 第一步 审 体裁：记叙文 时态：以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主 内容要点：初中生活关键词及背后的故事 写作框架：总—分—总 第二步 列 开头： 开门见山，引出主题 How time flies! The middle school life is coming to an end soon. 中间： 写出选择这个词的理由及其背后的故事 Why is it friendship Because what makes my school life enjoyable is... 结尾： 表达情感 Thanks to... my middle school days can be filled with joy and unforgettable memories. 高分范文 The keyword of my middle school life How time flies! The middle school life is coming to an end soon. When I recall the three years, one word comes to my mind. It is "friendship". Why is it friendship Because what makes my school life enjoyable is my best friend, Laura. I still remember the first day of my middle school. When I felt like a small fish in an ocean, Laura reached out to me with a smile. She told me jokes and funny stories. We explored the school together, and her kindness made the unfami ... ...
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