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课件网) Unit 1 This is me --Writing 教材分析 Lead in What’s the video about Just be yourself! Which part of your looks are you not happy with I am not happy with my eyes/nose/teeth... I am a little short/fat... Free talk Writing Task 每个人都或多或少对自己的外形有不满意的地方。某英文网站正在开展以“Experience of accepting myself”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇80左右的短文投稿，分享一段你接受自己的外形的经历及感想。 提示：1. Which part of your looks are you not happy with 2. How did you feel about it before 3. Why did you change your view of it 4. How do you feel about it now 5. What can you learn from this experience 要点 不满意的地方？ 之前的心情如何？ 看法为何改变？ 现在心情如何？ 从这次经历中学到了什么？ 人称 第一人称 时态 一般现在时/一般过去时(经历) Beginning Ending Writing structure Body 我不满意的地方，原因及心情 一次经历改变了我的想法，起因经过结果 感悟(学到了什么) 1. Which part of your looks are you not happy with 2. How did you feel about it before 3. Why did you change your view of it 4. How do you feel about it now 5. What can you learn from this experience Beginning 我不满意的地方，原因及心情 useful sentence pattern: I am not happy with my... I am not satisfied with my... Let's make a sentence! I am not happy/satisfied with my teeth/eyes/hair/height. Why Beginning useful sentence pattern: I am not happy/satisfied with my..., because... 我不满意的地方，原因及心情 Let's make a sentence! I am not happy with my teeth, because they are not straight(整齐). I am not happy with my eyes, because they are too small. I am not happy with my hair, because I don’t have much hair. I am not happy with my height, because I am a bit short. feelings Beginning 我不满意的地方，原因及心情 useful sentence pattern: I am not happy with my..., because... I am not confident when +句子 I hate doing sth ... I am not confident when I laughed. I hate taking photos. Beginning 我不满意的地方，原因及心情 1. 我想每个人对自己都有某些不喜欢的地方。(I suppose+句子) ——— 2. 对于我来说，我不满意我的牙齿，因为他们不整齐(straight)。 ——— 3. 当我笑的时候，我很不自信。 ——— 4. 我甚至讨厌拍照。(hate doing sth) ——— I suppose everyone has something they don’t like about themselves. For me, I wasn’t satisfied with my teeth because they weren’t straight. I wasn’t confident when I smiled. I even hated taking photos. Beginning 我不满意的地方，原因及心情 I suppose everyone has something they don’t like about themselves. For me, I wasn’t satisfied with my teeth because they weren’t straight. I wasn’t confident when I smiled. I even hated taking photos. Body 叙事三部曲： 1. 起因 2. 经过 3. 结果 Who changed you How did she/he changed you How do you feel about it now 一次经历改变了我的想法，起因经过结果 Body 5. 然而，一个微笑改变了我。 ——— 6. 一天，一位新同学加入了我们这个班级。(arrive in) ——— 7. 她从我身旁走过，并对着我微笑。(smile at sb) ——— 8. 我感觉到那笑容灿烂而亲切。 ——— 9. 这让我 ... ...
