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课件网) Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. 人教新目标版 九年级上 Section B3a-Selfcheck 写作优质公开课课件 Learning objectives 1. 能够理解并掌握描述情感的丰富词汇，区分不同情感程度的表达差异。能够识别记叙文的基本要素（时间、地点、人物、事件起因、经过、结果）和结构特点，理解"感受-原因-启示"的写作逻辑框架，并通过范例文本分析掌握使役结构在情感表达中的运用。 2.能够运用所学情感词汇和记叙文写作要点，完成一篇结构完整的个人经历叙述。在写作中能够按照事件发展顺序组织内容，准确使用"make+宾语+形容词"等结构描述情感变化，并通过具体细节展现情感产生的原因。 3.能够将所学写作方法和情感管理理念应用到实际生活中，通过书写经历培养积极看待事物的习惯，成为自己情绪的主人。 What kinds of feelings can you find Warming-up nervous/worried cheerful/comfortable proud/satisfied interested scared/afraid angry/unsatisfied What kinds of feelings can you find Warming-up what we see what we hear what we experience(经历) give us different feelings. What positive or negative words can help you to express your feelings Positive Negative sleepy angry happy comfortable excited embarrassed No matter how you feel, happy or sad, excited or nervous, your experiences are precious (珍贵的). We alwasy can learn something from them. 3a Think of some experiences that made you feel very happy or sad. Tell your partner about them. Use the following ideas to help you. winning/losing a competition getting good/bad grades on an exam performing something well/badly in front of a big group of people getting into a fight with your best friend your first trip outside your hometown Which experiences gave you positive or negative feelings Peter’s father gave him advice. Do you remember the story—The Winning Team Peter missed a goal. Peter realized that he was worried for no reason. Peter talked to his teammates. 3 How did it make you feel experience 4 and why 1 What happened 5 What did you learn from the experience 2 When & Where did it happen How to talk about experiences 本单元的话题是“Feelings(情感)”. 谈论人或事物或经历给人们的生活和情感带来的影响。 写作时，要求能针对日常生活中的一些人或事物或经历，描述事物经历以及自己或他人的感受。 语篇结构通常是记叙文。主要说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即5W1H( what, who, when, where, why)和(how)。 人称应是_____人称，时态应是_____。 话题分析(Topic Analysis) 第一 过去时 Make an outline outline Beginning Body Ending 开篇点题 事件及经历 总结感受 When/where What I learned... What/who/how/why 3b Write a story similar to the one in 2b using your notes in 3a. In your story, try to explain the following: What happened When did it happen Where did it happen How did it make you feel Why What did you learn from the experience 初中三年的校园生活精彩纷呈, 总有一些经历是令你难以忘怀的。学校英语报 English Learning 正在以 “My Unforgettable Experience” 为主题向应届毕业生征文。 请写一篇80—100词的英语短文，叙述你的一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你在其中的感悟和收获。 Sample writing How to write Step 1--审 内容：谈论初中三年难忘 ... ...
