2018中考英语书面表达系列（4）（图表类）及参考范文

21世纪教育网 –中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 2018年中考英语书面表达系列（四）（图表类）及参考范文 字体大小统一，都有参考范文和解析。 1. 请仔细审图，假设这是Jane的房间，请你根据提示词汇帮她描述一下房间内物品的摆放情况． 要求：以第一人称描述，不少于40词．开头已给出，不计入总词数． 提示词汇：bed，shoes（鞋），picture，wall（墙），bookcase，clock，computer，CDs This is my room．It's very clean! 2-1-c-n-j-y 【参考范文】 1. This is my room（ 高分句型）．It's very clean!（引出话题）There is a big bed．My shoes are near the bed（高分句型）．My alarm clock is on the dresser．Those are my pictures．They are on the wall．Where are my books？Look!They are in my bookcase．And on the desk are my computer and some CDs．（具体介绍房间内物品的摆放情况） 【解析】这是一篇图片作文．本文要求按照题目要求结合图片中的内容完成这篇介绍房间摆设的作文．写作中要包含房间内物品的摆放位置、注意方位的描述等．根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题．写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系． 高分句型： ①This is my room．这是我的房间．句子中This is表示这是什么，用以介绍某人或者某物． ②My shoes are near the bed．我的鞋子在床附近．这里near the bed表示在床附近． 这篇短文简明、扼要地介绍了房间的布局，并包含了文中所要求的基本信息．其中句式灵活、多变，介词短语的准确使用为文章增色不少．如on the bed，under the bed，Those are my pictures．，Where are my books？Look!，最为值得称道的是倒装句式的运用很到位，如And on the desk are my computer and some CDs．学习中再注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．2·1·c·n·j·y 2. 下面六幅图描述了十月九日星期三早晨你所经历的一件事．请根据这些图画，用英语写一篇日记． 注意：1 日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使其连贯． 2 日记格式已写出，注意时态． 3 词数：80 左右。 Oct.9th Wednesday Fine In the morning，my friend and I 【出处：21教育名师】 【参考范文】 Oct.9th Wednesday Fine In the morning，my friend and I went to the park by bike．（引出话题）A boy before us was riding a bike very fast．Suddenly he fell off his bike and hurt his leg．He was lying on the ground and couldn't move．（一个小孩出了事故）My friend and I ran to him and tried to help him．We decided to send him to the nearest hospital at once（高分句型）．（我们奋力挽救）In the hospital，he was well examined and given timely treatment．His parents came to the hospital soon after getting a call．We told them what had happened．They were grateful to us for helping their son．（具体介绍在医院的情景）Though we didn't play in the park，we felt very happy!（高分句型）（我们的感受） 【解析】21cnjy.com 高分句型： ①We decided to send him to the nearest hospital at once．我们决定马上送他去最近的医院．句子中decide to do sth表示决定做某事． ②Though we didn't play in the park，we felt very happy．虽然我们没有在公园里玩，但我们感到很高兴．这里though引导一个让步状语从句． 图画作文要求考生认真观察图画，思考写作主题，能够围绕主题，将图画内容一一描述出来． 3. 以下图画分别呈现了今年小明和小玲为妈妈过母亲节的情景．请 ... ...