Module 7 Revision How to make writing better课件（33张）

课件33张PPT。How to Make Your Writing Bettermake up 化妆Do you want to be more beautiful or handsome? How?inner beautykind talented humorous...outer beautymake upa better personHow about writing?dress upThrough this class, we will know how to make our writing better from its “outer beauty” to “inner beauty”.Learning aimWhat kind of writing is a good writing?Cover all the contents (要点全) Be well-organized (分段、逻辑) Use advanced words and sentences (高级表达) Show neat handwriting(规范书写)Beautiful Handwriting& Good Structure Outer Beauty - Handwriting&structureInner Beauty-Phrases Good Phrases Task 1(1). Mother’s Day is coming/approaching. (2). Learning English well is very important. (3). We should use the natural resources. (4). As the number of Chinese learners is increasing, it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. drawing near/around the corner/on the wayof great importanceare supposed toon the riseon the increaseTask1 使用短语替换黑体部分Advanced and diverse sentencesTask 2Inner Beauty-Sentences1. We students can study happily and effectively only by combining work and play. (话题：学习生活) 用only+状语置句首部分倒装句(inversion)改写： 2. As economy develops rapidly, we are living a happy life.（话题：社会生活） 用with复合结构改写黑体部分： Task2 按要求改写以下句子Only by combining work and play can we students can study happily and effectively.With economy developing rapidly/With the rapid development of economy, we are living a happy life. 3. Many highways have been built in China, and that makes it easier for people to travel from one place to another.（话题：社会发展） 用现在分词做结果状语改写黑体部分： Many highways have been built in China, making it easier for people to travel from one place to another.Task2 按要求改写以下句子用which引导非限制性定语(attributive clause) 从句改写黑体部分：Many highways have been built in China, which makes it easier for people to travel from one place to another.4. I am eager to participate in the volunteer work because I want to help more people.(话题：活动申请) 用The reason why...is that....改写： The reason why I am eager to participate in the volunteer work is that I want to help more people.Task2 按要求改写以下句子Proper tansitional words/phrasesTask 3Inner Beauty-Transitional wordsAlso full points! As is known to all, music plays an important role in our life. I am fond of listening to light music when I am depressed, because it can cheer me up. As far as I’m concerned, music is of great importance in our life. , it can make us feel relaxed both mentally and physically, which can reduce our pressure in study and life. In addition, music provides us a platform where we can learn about another culture. , music is known as a universal language, which makes it easy for people from different countries to communicate with each other. ,music is a necessary part in our daily life, which makes our life colorful and wonderful. To begin withLast but not leastIn ... ...