人教版高考英语复习书面表达-如何扩充句子课件 （共35张PPT）

课件35张PPT。英语书面表达指导 短话长说———高考评分标准第五档（21-25） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的，覆盖所有的内容要点，用了丰富的语法结构，语法与高级词汇有少些错误，全篇流畅，连词使用较好。第四档（16-20） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的，写漏了一两个要点，语法和词汇基本正确，有少些错误，主要是想使用高级词汇与复杂句子所致。第二档 （6-10） ： 未适当完成试题规定的任务，有要点，但表达不清晰，只有一些句子可读。第一档 （1-5） ：未完成试题规定的任务，只是一些字词的堆积，不成句，让读者根本不明白写什么。0分：空白，或者抄写一些无关的东西。第三档（11-15） ： 大错（时态、句子结构等）超过五六处，不能及格，写漏了一些内容，但覆盖了主要要点，基本上让人能够看懂，基本达到了预期目的。高考作文评分原则 １．形式上胜人一筹，也就是文章结构，谴词造句 ２．内容要点，发挥想象，适当拓展一、利用文章总体模板1. 文章开头的总体交待 ——— 引出主题A. Recently, we had a discussion about … B. we carried out a survey of … C. When it comes to the topic whether … 2. 呈现不同的观点——— 陈述观点 A. Some of them are in favor of the idea that… However, others hold a completely opposite opinion. B. Some people firmly believe that…. Others argue that …呈现论据时常用的连接词 …in?the?first?place,?_____(原因一). ?in?the?second?place, furthermore, _____(原因二). So?it?goes?without?saying that?_____(观点一).? …Some people hold?the?idea?that_____ (观点二).?In?their?point?of?view,? on?the?one?hand，_____(原因一)?.??On?the?other?hand, _____ (原因二).?Therefore,? there is?no doubt that?_____(观点二).　 3. 结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语——— 总结观点As far as I’m concerned,…/ From my point of view, …/ To sum up, … 如何从形式上胜人一筹？二，句式多样，文章增“靓”． Rewrite the sentences 1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法1. 使用从句或非谓语动词使句子高档When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.If I am given another chance, I will succeed. Given another chance, I will succeed. In order to improve his English, he studies hard.方法2. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力 he returned home did he realize his foolishness.by changing the way we live can we save the earth.Clever he is, he does not work hard.stands the clock tower.方法3. 尝试多样化表达方式 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast. All these make people’s lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. _____ which_____ With the development of _____ _____ _____ _____so ___ that_____ _____ In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes people’s lives convenient, pleasant… Beijing, people’s lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful. Nowadays, Beijing is developing fast people’s lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.句式多样 文章增“靓”1. 使用从句或非谓语动词使　　　　　　句子高档2. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力3. 尝试多样化表 ... ...