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课件网) 如何通过语法教学提高书面表达能力 Shirley 三要素连贯模式 2 三段式写作模式 1 Shirely ’s writing mode 三段式写作模式（2015年全国高考北京卷） Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines. When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively . Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited. We hope we can have more activities of this kind! 三要素连贯模式 2 三段式写作模式 1 三要素连贯模式 句 2 词 1 语 3 三要素连贯模式之“词” 优先选用短语，表达多样化 2 多用具体词，少用笼统词 1 三要素连贯模式之“词” 优先选用短语，表达多样化 2 多用具体词，少用笼统词 1 优选短语，表达多样化 I want it. I can’t bear it. 优选短语，表达多样化 Many houses are being built. 优选短语，表达多样化 三要素连贯模式之“句” 句 2 词 1 语 3 三要素连贯模式之“句” S+V S+V+O S+L+P S+V+IO+DO S+V+O+ OC 强调句 Emphatic sentences Those who like reading extensively say we get our knowledge through reading. Those who like reading extensively say we get our knowledge through reading. Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge. 强调句 Emphatic sentences 倒装句 Inverted sentences The library is to the east of the teaching building. The library is to the east of the teaching building. East of the teaching building is the library. 倒装句 Inverted sentences We have done the work well with your help. 虚拟语气 Subjunctive mood We have done the work well with your help. Without your help, we could not have done the work well. 虚拟语气 Subjunctive mood Because my teacher helps me , my English has greatly improved. With复合结构 With compound structures With复合结构 With compound structures Because my teacher helps me , my English has greatly improved. With my teacher helping me, my English has greatly improved. 谚语 Proverbs There is a proverb that goes ,“An inch of time is worth an inch of gold.” As the old saying goes , ”Practice makes perfect.” 用非谓语动词简化复合句 After they were shown around the lab, the visitors went to the library . 用非谓语动词简化复合句 After they were shown around the lab, the visitors went to the library . Having been shown around the lab, the visitors went to the library. When the airport is completed next year, it will help promote tourism in this area. 用非谓语动词简化复合句 When the airport is completed next year, it will help promote tourism in this area. The airport to be completed next year will help promote tourism in this area. 用非谓语动词简化复合句 Because I was amazed at how skillful they were, I determined to be just as good as them. 用非谓语动词 ... ...
