书面表达微技能五：语言的丰富性--句式多样性策略（无答案）

书面表达微技能五：语言的丰富性--句式多样性策略 复习书面表达微技能：1.审题策略 2.主题句、支持句策略3.扩句策略 4.1+N拓展策略。 扩句：书面表达以短句为主，长句为辅。在句子中添加人物、地点、时间、形容词、副词、以及各种从句等，以提高表达的准确性、全面性。 Li Ping is reading. Li Ping is reading in the classroom.(加地点） Li Ping is reading in the classroom with his best friend.(加人物） Li Ping is reading carefully in the classroom with his best friend.(加副词） Li Ping is reading carefully in the classroom with his best friend who often shares great books with him.（加定语从句） At the moment, Li Ping is reading carefully in the classroom with his best friend who often shares great books with him.（加时间） At the moment, Li Ping , our monitor, is reading carefully in the classroom with his best friend who often shares great books with him.（加同位语） 请根据所给的主题句与支持句的主干部分，运用1+N拓展策略，丰富文本内容。 I’m having a wonderful time in Changshan. I’ve done so many things. For example, I’ve visited Sanqu Stone Forest, Hushan Park and Wenfeng Tower. The tower is very tall.What’s more, I’ve tasted Changshan Huyou. Huyou is very delicious. I have also been to Qingshi Stone Park.There you can see many kinds of stones in different shapes and sizes. Huyou and stones are the symbol of Changshan. 书面表达微技能5：语言的丰富性-句式多样性策略 句式多样性能体现语言丰富性。只有句式多样化，文章才会生动有趣，充满活力。句式多样性指的是同一内容用不同的句式来表达。也可指通过变换句子的结构，使文章的语言灵动而不单一。 【微技能指导】 一、不同句式表达同一内容 例1：2017宁波中考作文 三年的初中生活让你收获满满。校英语报邀你写一篇短文，给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹或他们的父母提一些建议。请你结合自己的学习经历选择其中一个对象，阐述你的观点。 这篇文章需用到提建议的句型。以建议学弟学妹要多参加各种社团为例： 1. You join some clubs. 2. I you should join some clubs. 3. I you to join some clubs. 4. join some clubs? 5. joining some clubs? 6. join some clubs.（尽力） 7. join some clubs.（不要忘记） 8. join some clubs.(是一个好主意） 9. to join some clubs.（对于你来说很重要） 10. （join )some clubs will be good for you. 例2：类似的例子还有兴趣与爱好话题的描述，我们如果通篇使用I like.那该是多么单调啊!如果用丰富的句型替换，如： be crazy about, be fond of, be interested in, be good at, nothing is more enjoyable than ..., spend lots of time doing sth...等来替换like,文章会更有层次。这就是不同句式表达同一内容的方法策略。 I like playing basketball.(改写句子） (1) . (2) . 二、变换句型结构 主语句式多样性 一篇文章可使用不同的主语，也是语言丰富性的一种体现。如下面描述语言学习问题的片段： My biggest problem is that I can't memorize English words. I usually spend lots of time doing that, but it doesn't work. Another thing I feel difficult is that I'm afraid to speak English in front of class. What’s more, I'm worried about my writing. There are always a few mistakes in my writing. What should I do? 从以上片段可以看出：不同主语的变换，尽显英语风采。 下面介绍5种不同主语句式,并仿写句 ... ...