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课件网) 八年级 写作训练课（一） Writing Task 1 Can you introduce yourself ? 外貌特征：I am(tall/thin/heavy/short…). I have long/short hair. / I wear glasses. 擅长/爱好：I am good at(English/math/ Chinese). I do well in….I am good at playing… I like/love /enjoy (swimming /singing/ dancing/shopping). … 性格：I ____outgoing /quiet /friendly. 品质：I ___(be) ready to help others. 自我评价：I think I… 形容词前加 相应的be 实义动词原形前不能加be am am Personal Flash Show 闪秀 Introduce your friend Task 2: 假如Lily 是你最好的朋友，请你从以下几个方面向大家介绍她： 1.和你一样高；大眼睛黑头发。 2.与你爱好相同，都喜欢运动；身体很健康，每周锻炼两三次；有时上网；喜欢看英文电影。 3.乐于助人，帮我学数学。 4.聪明，成绩好。在校学习努力，应向她学习。 思路点拨 第一步：审 题 人称 时态 第二步：列 提纲 第一段 介绍她，开篇点题。 第二段 描述她的外貌，爱好等情况。 第三段 总结全文，画龙点睛谈感受。 列出相关的词汇或句型： 第三人称 （she） 一般现在时(动词用三单) 第二步：列出相关的词汇或短语： 1.最好的朋友 2.一样高 3.有相同爱好 4.爱运动 5.每周锻炼三次 6.上网 7.乐于助人 8.帮我数学 9.成绩好 10.在校学习刻苦 11.喜欢看英语电影 12.向她学习 best friend as tall as have the same hobby love/like/enjoy doing sports exercise three times a week use the Internet / go online be ready to help others help me with math get / have good grades work/study hard at school enjoy/like watching English movies learn from her 第三步：加 主语及修饰语等，写出完整句子。 第四步：连 运用and, so, however, though/although, not only…but also…,first, then…等连接词将以上要点句子连成文章，并注意句型多样化。 范文如下: My best friend 第五步：美 检查美化(书写工整，拼写错误，大小写，标点) Lily is my best friend. I like her very much. She is as tall as me. She has big eyes and black hair. We have the same hobby and love doing sports. She also likes watching English movies. She exercises twice or three times a week. S0 she is very healthy. She is not only friendly but also ready to help others. And she often helps me with math. She is smart and she studies hard at school . Though she sometimes goes online，she always gets good grades. I should learn from her. 常见错误： 一、主谓不一致 My favorite sports is running and swimming . are 二、缺少动词 I happy if I can visit the Great Wall . 三、缺介少冠 Because heavy rain, we can’t play soccer. the of When you across the street, you should be careful. come will be 四、词性误用 She often by bus to school. takes the/a 五、代词混淆 I mother and I went shopping yesterday. My 六、句序混乱 We every day at school do sports. We do sports at school every day. Task 3 请你根据你的生活情况写一篇文章，内容包括： 1.你的生活方式是否健康； 2.你有哪些好的和不好的生活习惯； 3.你在平常都做些什么； 4.谈谈你对自己生活方式的看法。 写作要求： 1.不能抄袭原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 2.语句连贯，注意分段，80词左右。 思路点拨 第一步：审题 人称 时态 第二步：列提纲 第一段 介绍自己，开篇点题。 第二段 描述生活习惯以 ... ...
