高考英语作文高分策略：名校真实学生考试中高分作文整理（六）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 高考英语作文高分策略： 名校真实学生考试中高分作文整理（六） 作文题目： 假设你是学生会主席李华。你校将举行一系列活动庆祝第33个教师节。其中，展示教师形象的纪录片(documentary)需要拍摄外教Mr. Jenkins在你校工作和生活的片段，并对其进行采访。请你写一封电子邮件，并附上拍摄和采访方案，请求Mr. Jenkins对此给予支持并提出建议。 审题 这次的作文题对内容的限定较多，也相对繁杂，所以要理清每条信息。可以在读题时把内容要点进行归类： 1. 事件：学校将举行一系列活动； 2. 目的：庆祝第33个教师节； 3. 需要外教支持：拍摄包含工作和生活片段的纪录片，接受采访； 4. 需要外教帮忙：对拍摄和采访方案提建议。 然后，可以确定文章大体能分成三段，提纲如下： 第一段：为了庆祝第33个教师节，学校将举行一系列活动，因此写信寻求支持和建议； 第二段：希望支持拍摄纪录片（工作+生活）并接受采访 第三段：附上方案，希望得到建议。适当感谢。 拓展部分： 题目中“接受采访”尽管也是希望外教配合的一个环节，但只是一笔带过，可以适当增添些采访的内容，但由于题目明确说明具体方案会随邮件附上，故不应该详写采访的细节安排。 写作模式 + 星级句式 第一段：表明写信目的 (因何事；有何目的) 范文： I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. Our school is planning a series of activities to celebrate the 33rd Teachers’ Day, which falls on Sep 10th, 2017. The documentary featuring the teachers’ professional images, as a highlight, needs your participation and support. 1. 因何事：The 33rd Teachers’ Day is coming. Our school is planning some activities to celebrate it. We decide to make a documentary to show the teachers’ professional images. 星级句式1: With the approaching of the 33rd Teachers’ Day / With the 33rd Teachers’ Day around the corner, our school has planned to organize some activities, including filming a special documentary to demonstrate the teachers’ professional images. 星级句式2：Owing to the arrival of the 33rd Teachers’ Day, our school intends to hold a variety of activities to celebrate it. Among all these activities, the most important one is to film a documentary, which will show the teachers’ professional images. 2. 有何请求：I’m writing in the hope that you will accept our interview and give us support. 星级句式1: We would like to photo you about your life and work. Besides, we also want to interview you to make our documentary more interesting. 星级句式2: I’m writing on behalf of our school to extend an invitation to you to participate in the documentary about some teachers in our school. 第二段： 告知具体内容 (什么，如何……等等) 基本要点: 告知对方关于拍摄和采访的相关事宜 范文：A group of 10 distinguished teachers including you have been selected to star in the documentary. We hope to film some clips to demonstrate your work and life in our school. Besides, an interview of about three minutes with you will be conducted. The schemes of the video shooting and interview are included in the attachment and we earnestly expect your suggestions to make them better. 要点1: 拍摄 范文：A group of 10 distinguished teachers including you have been selected to star in the docum ... ...